Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

LOL, you got me hook, line, and sinker, to use a fishing expression, the fish outsmarted me and took everything. I was envisioning a crusty old man, instead of a smart bird. Well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you Terry. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Aww. Very creative story for the challenge! This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.

Best wishes,

Alexandra


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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you Alexandra, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I stay confused as to who or what is doing what with whom. Is it a dog with the key in its mouth? Surely, not a grlfriend or spouse, is it? Be well.
now I ramble t meet requirements jbbfnialsgbfs;oiasuf

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you.