2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
This shows a beautiful sunrise over the ocean and that is the title of this post. I love how you incorporate breakfast into watching the sunrise. And, I love the last line, Sunny-side up. As always you are the master of Haiku poetry. Well-written and tells a story we would all like to imagine.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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This shows a beautiful sunrise over the ocean and that is the title of this post. I love how you incorporate breakfast into watching the sunrise. And, I love the last line, Sunny-side up. As always you are the master of Haiku poetry. Well-written and tells a story we would all like to imagine.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome.
Thanks for the hugs.
Jesse
Comment from Sarita Méndez
This is a nice haiku, very evocative and the picture you chose perfectly fits your verses. The parallel between the sunrise and the yellow of the egg is very well done.
Thank you very much for sharing this haiku.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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This is a nice haiku, very evocative and the picture you chose perfectly fits your verses. The parallel between the sunrise and the yellow of the egg is very well done.
Thank you very much for sharing this haiku.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a delightful haiku, Gypsy. What a pair of enjoyable pictures, first the sea rolling in to welcome the sunrise and then the entertaining of an egg being made sunny side up. This was indeed a wonderful concept. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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What a delightful haiku, Gypsy. What a pair of enjoyable pictures, first the sea rolling in to welcome the sunrise and then the entertaining of an egg being made sunny side up. This was indeed a wonderful concept. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from royowen
What a great haiku, made particularly attractive with a wonderful phot, expertly shot by a photographic expert, this is beautifully written dear Gypsy, an excellent job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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What a great haiku, made particularly attractive with a wonderful phot, expertly shot by a photographic expert, this is beautifully written dear Gypsy, an excellent job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Lisasview
Simple words that evoke so many thoughts dear Gypsy, really enjoyed having those thoughts this morning in Spain... Sometimes the simplest of things make everything clear..
Lisasview
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Simple words that evoke so many thoughts dear Gypsy, really enjoyed having those thoughts this morning in Spain... Sometimes the simplest of things make everything clear..
Lisasview
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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I don't know if I told you, I'm from madrid, spain. Where do you live?
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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I am in Benitachell, close to Moraira in Costa Blanca North..
Yes, I think we connected when I first joined Fan Story...a few months ago.
Love Madrid... all the art... as I am an artist...
Lisa
Comment from Ginda Simpson
A Haiku that surely brings a smile to the reader. The sunny-side up breakfast is such a clever way to describe a new day. It should be the breakfast of choice.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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A Haiku that surely brings a smile to the reader. The sunny-side up breakfast is such a clever way to describe a new day. It should be the breakfast of choice.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, ginda.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
I accept your invitation! Seriously, the color scheme on this one is exquisite. The play on the 'sun' is well-done and really brings a feeling of tranquility, even with such a short piece.
Most enjoyable.
Douglas
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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I accept your invitation! Seriously, the color scheme on this one is exquisite. The play on the 'sun' is well-done and really brings a feeling of tranquility, even with such a short piece.
Most enjoyable.
Douglas
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Douglas. (*÷*) I'll fix you a Spanish breakfast. (*<>*)
Gypsy hugs
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In a different life?
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Yes, in a different life. :)
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
firstly, I don't eat a solid breakfast, even though I do love me a nice soft egg, sunny side up... and the way you tied the feeling of joy and positive attitude with sunrise and sunny side up is a true nourishment of and for the soul.
Presentation, as always is a magic visual in sight and mind.
Can I have tomatoes with that... gotta get my vitamin C hit and make this a complete meal. LOL!
With our thoughts we create...
food for the soul.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Hi MariVal,
firstly, I don't eat a solid breakfast, even though I do love me a nice soft egg, sunny side up... and the way you tied the feeling of joy and positive attitude with sunrise and sunny side up is a true nourishment of and for the soul.
Presentation, as always is a magic visual in sight and mind.
Can I have tomatoes with that... gotta get my vitamin C hit and make this a complete meal. LOL!
With our thoughts we create...
food for the soul.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Yay, you're back. I'm happy you like this one. I hope you and Jade are well.
Muchos Abrazos
MariVal
"I would die happy at the end of day, if I could see the sunset on my lover's eyes.." --unknown
Comment from GWHARGIS
This whole poem seemed to be about the beginning of the day. The Sunnyside up of the yolk, symbolic of the rising sun. Breakfast to start the day. This was a wonderful poem. Grrtchen
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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This whole poem seemed to be about the beginning of the day. The Sunnyside up of the yolk, symbolic of the rising sun. Breakfast to start the day. This was a wonderful poem. Grrtchen
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RodG
An intriguing haiku. The Speaker seems relaxed, maybe on vacation, eating breakfast on her terrace as the sun rises.
One does wonder if she ordered the egg sunny-side up because of what she was watching. Rod
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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An intriguing haiku. The Speaker seems relaxed, maybe on vacation, eating breakfast on her terrace as the sun rises.
One does wonder if she ordered the egg sunny-side up because of what she was watching. Rod
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Yes, sunrise is in juxtaposition with sunny side up.
Thank you very much, Rod.
Gypsy hugs