Saving Mr. Calvin
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written. (Though i would still prefer a face-to-face meeting with someone who had occupied my mind (soul?)
Have you considered coming up with a fictionalized substance to replace dysprosium? (Ohmie would have - smiley face here)
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Well written. (Though i would still prefer a face-to-face meeting with someone who had occupied my mind (soul?)
Have you considered coming up with a fictionalized substance to replace dysprosium? (Ohmie would have - smiley face here)
Best wishes.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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No need for a fictionalized substance as we will soon see. There are other lanthanides that might work!
Comment from Paul Manton
Sorry no sixes today for another intriguing and beautifully written piece. Dialogue which flowed like water, good connectivity and a wonderful economy of words. I am here for the duration, Jim.
I realize that you may have to gain a Nobel Prize for discovering a hitherto unknown element! Otherwise how will you displace dysprosium? This looks like a theme for at least two more chapters.
Can't wait!
Paul
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Sorry no sixes today for another intriguing and beautifully written piece. Dialogue which flowed like water, good connectivity and a wonderful economy of words. I am here for the duration, Jim.
I realize that you may have to gain a Nobel Prize for discovering a hitherto unknown element! Otherwise how will you displace dysprosium? This looks like a theme for at least two more chapters.
Can't wait!
Paul
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Paul. I very much appreciate your kind review. Just remember, dysprosium is but one of the lanthanides. Perhaps another would fill the bill equally well!
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Time for more study! Keep me on my toes, Jim.
Best from Paul
Comment from JSD
Excellent progress being made. It is interesting to wonder how they feel when told about the time travel. I wonder how I would feel if someone told me intimate things about my life that could only be known through time travel?
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Excellent progress being made. It is interesting to wonder how they feel when told about the time travel. I wonder how I would feel if someone told me intimate things about my life that could only be known through time travel?
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thanks, John. That was the fun part of these chapters: from Kevin's perspective, thinking how best to present the outrageous fact of time travel and mind melding to someone else and from Kenny's perspective to digest what you've just heard and try to make sense of it.