Comment from JSD

Excellent

No, he would not have even tried. I'm surprised he didn't find out and alert the authorities. As exciting as ever. I am very keen to find out what happens next. Presumably he will give himself up????

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Would you? To be hung in two days?
Thank you for your very kind review.

reply by JSD on 18-Oct-2023

Well, if it was the right thing to do, and God was on my side.

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Ben has learned to follow God's leading.

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

God has been on Ben's side from Colorado to Chicago, shanghaied, and in San Francisco. Ben has seen God do miraculous things as he learned to follow His lead within his calling. I think Ben would see this as the same as Paul being released from prison's chains.

reply by JSD on 18-Oct-2023

Oooh. Nice comparison.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

My good ness that was an amazing chapter. Mind you, I wouldn't trust inmates with mallets either. The authorities will doubtless assume Ben was involved in the escape plan though. Edit: "Relacing the mess with another spud" (replacing)

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Thank you!
And thank you for the catch.