2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from rama devi
I love the simplicity and power of your metaphorical, reflective (literally) satori line. So much said in few words. It captures the image and feeling simultaneously. Brilliant brevity. Beautiful presentation - with the sunrise bot on the inside and the outside of the cup just like it is both on the inside of you along with the external scenery. Counting all those sunrises, its quite a lot! FOUR! Three literal and one metaphorical~
Bravo.
Warmly,
rd
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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I love the simplicity and power of your metaphorical, reflective (literally) satori line. So much said in few words. It captures the image and feeling simultaneously. Brilliant brevity. Beautiful presentation - with the sunrise bot on the inside and the outside of the cup just like it is both on the inside of you along with the external scenery. Counting all those sunrises, its quite a lot! FOUR! Three literal and one metaphorical~
Bravo.
Warmly,
rd
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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It's good to hear from you, Rama Devi, I hope all is well with you. (*=*)
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Your kind and insightful words mean a lot to me.
May you have a wonderful day. Namaste
Gypsy hugs
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Namaste, dear G. Have a wonderful day too!
Comment from lyenochka
That's the nice thing about looking into a dark liquid like coffee or tea, it can reflect the sky if sipping outside and the morning's beautiful sunrise is seen in the morning drink.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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That's the nice thing about looking into a dark liquid like coffee or tea, it can reflect the sky if sipping outside and the morning's beautiful sunrise is seen in the morning drink.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm not sure about this one. I may do some changes.
Love
Marival