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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You left us hanging here with your last line Lea. A well written post as you continue to look after yourself in the forest and battle with the lack of food and water every day. Thank goodness for your friends. The threat of the woman with the walking stick haunts, as she sounds like a trouble maker. Six months is a long time to be living in the wild and I am glad the weather is getting warmer as at least you won't freeze, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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You left us hanging here with your last line Lea. A well written post as you continue to look after yourself in the forest and battle with the lack of food and water every day. Thank goodness for your friends. The threat of the woman with the walking stick haunts, as she sounds like a trouble maker. Six months is a long time to be living in the wild and I am glad the weather is getting warmer as at least you won't freeze, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Yes that woman was trouble but I think I might have more trouble to her. I will be discussing her and more in my next chapter and those she deals with but but with signs of the air that's feeling, I will have to go ,
when the weather changed from summer to fall. That's when I go, The weather certainly wasn't the only reason. Cat and mouse begins by world strength. And the weather changes all the things plus a storm caused me to leave. I Will write about that soon too and what happened after. Thank you so much for reviewing again and offering your thoughts. I'm always happy to see your name and review come up your opinion matters to me, thank you again!
Comment from kahpot
I like your notes, you realize this girl and her actions were you, but no more, again your words draw the reader in, now we are hoping for the noises/voice amount to very little, very well written, I look forward to next time****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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I like your notes, you realize this girl and her actions were you, but no more, again your words draw the reader in, now we are hoping for the noises/voice amount to very little, very well written, I look forward to next time****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Again, I so appreciate your kindness, your words of encouragement your review and for reading you rock!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your story gets more interesting with each chapter you add. My heart goes out to you for the pain you suffered throughout your young life. I will continue to follow your story and hope things get better for you.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Your story gets more interesting with each chapter you add. My heart goes out to you for the pain you suffered throughout your young life. I will continue to follow your story and hope things get better for you.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you again, I really appreciate your kindness and your insight. I'm so happy that you're finding it interesting. And that you're following along on this journey with me. I appreciate that so much. My whole life was about doing it myself. So it becomes difficult to let go of the rains but you all make it easy. Thank you again. I hope you have a fabulous evening!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This part of the autobiography seems to describe a time of homelessness, but it is out in the forest away from people as much as possible. Survival mode is what you seemed to be living in.
Little fixes:
It was usually preceded by something bad.
I think, after reading this, you might mean: It was usually followed by something bad. Unless, and I'm not sure how you would know this, but if the stepfather did something bad before arriving home which also affected you.
Instead of Viola dinner!
I think you mean: Voila with a back accent on the a like this: à
Because otherwise, it would be a kind of string instrument or an old-fashioned lady's name.
Your descriptions are great as to what you were trying to accomplish with the fires and cooking. And what a great hook at the end to want to keep reading.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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This part of the autobiography seems to describe a time of homelessness, but it is out in the forest away from people as much as possible. Survival mode is what you seemed to be living in.
Little fixes:
It was usually preceded by something bad.
I think, after reading this, you might mean: It was usually followed by something bad. Unless, and I'm not sure how you would know this, but if the stepfather did something bad before arriving home which also affected you.
Instead of Viola dinner!
I think you mean: Voila with a back accent on the a like this: à
Because otherwise, it would be a kind of string instrument or an old-fashioned lady's name.
Your descriptions are great as to what you were trying to accomplish with the fires and cooking. And what a great hook at the end to want to keep reading.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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You are so smart, wow, thank you for this fine review. I'll go ahead and make that corrections. I do appreciate you and your comment. Absolutely, all are drawn to help or return completely grateful. It's so nice to have you commenting. Because you're such a fine writer and your advice is invaluable. I appreciate it so much again. I hope you have a wonderful evening!