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Saving Mr. Calvin

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Golf's legacy and future

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Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Nicely written.
I don't see where it could go from here. Time travel seems to have come to a stopping point - unless the next trip is to the future, with the 'glory' of golf restored, along with more inventions such as 'guided balls'.
We'll see.

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Your first impression is correct. That's the end of the time travels. Now for the solution, which is what Part 4 is all about and will hopefully lead the game of golf into the future.
Comment from JSD
Exceptional
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And I award you my end of part 6, Jim, for writing a story that has entertained me more than any other story on here. It's such a strange subject and such a strange plot, but I have found myself constantly engaged. Well done, as always, and thank you.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    That's the highest compliment you could have given me, John, the fact that it has engaged you. Thank you, my friend, and for the 6 stars too.