Guided by Faith
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An excellent chapter here, Barbara, with a lot going on, not least with Emma who seems to have one thing happening to her after another. And now Molly which has really propelled her into Seth's waiting arms. The mystery of this attack and the person who cut the screen still hangs over the story while Seth's future with Emma looks increasingly sealed. Well written and enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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An excellent chapter here, Barbara, with a lot going on, not least with Emma who seems to have one thing happening to her after another. And now Molly which has really propelled her into Seth's waiting arms. The mystery of this attack and the person who cut the screen still hangs over the story while Seth's future with Emma looks increasingly sealed. Well written and enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You certainly covered a lot of ground in this chapter, with all the characters and even the dogs. But as the old saying goes, "All is well that ends well." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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You certainly covered a lot of ground in this chapter, with all the characters and even the dogs. But as the old saying goes, "All is well that ends well." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
This was a pretty high tension chapter. It started off with a bang as Emma's dog gets attacked, and we see everyone scrambling around to help, even Ace. And in the background of the whole chapter is the ominous break in attempt. And the suspense isn't really cleared up by the end of this. So that's hanging in the air. We do see Seth being pretty protective here, concerned, and Emma slowly bringing down the barriers. She still wants to pay all the bills and stay independent, but Seth is winning her heart. estory
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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This was a pretty high tension chapter. It started off with a bang as Emma's dog gets attacked, and we see everyone scrambling around to help, even Ace. And in the background of the whole chapter is the ominous break in attempt. And the suspense isn't really cleared up by the end of this. So that's hanging in the air. We do see Seth being pretty protective here, concerned, and Emma slowly bringing down the barriers. She still wants to pay all the bills and stay independent, but Seth is winning her heart. estory
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"Tell one of the assistances when you leave." Change to "assistants".
"Maybe it'll might make me feel better." Take "might" away.
"He's who we take all our K-9s too." Change too to to (lol!)
Sorry I spent most of this review offering corrections, but I knew you'd want to know.
Of course, now the question is who cut the screen. We always have more than one suspect where Emma is concerned. For such a nice person, she seems to have a lot of bad news people around her. Jealousy can be a very powerful enemy.
Have a great week, Barbara.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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"Tell one of the assistances when you leave." Change to "assistants".
"Maybe it'll might make me feel better." Take "might" away.
"He's who we take all our K-9s too." Change too to to (lol!)
Sorry I spent most of this review offering corrections, but I knew you'd want to know.
Of course, now the question is who cut the screen. We always have more than one suspect where Emma is concerned. For such a nice person, she seems to have a lot of bad news people around her. Jealousy can be a very powerful enemy.
Have a great week, Barbara.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the help. I really appreciate it. I made changes in a couple of those sentences as I posted and still got them wrong. Again, thank you. We will discover who cut the screen very soon.
Comment from Sanku
I hope and pray molly would make it . The more I read your works,deeper I wish for a life in a small town like this .Cities are so unfriendly and indifferent...I am enjoying watch Emma and Seth come closer...
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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I hope and pray molly would make it . The more I read your works,deeper I wish for a life in a small town like this .Cities are so unfriendly and indifferent...I am enjoying watch Emma and Seth come closer...
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Small towns are the way to go, but they are dying. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
A fine chapter, but sad for Molly. The screen was cut so she would get out, but did the wild dog belong to whoever cut the screen? And was tis a plan to lure Emma out of the house and get her too?
Wendy
Edit:"Tell one of the assistances when you leave"(assistants)
"I'm taking a shower. Maybe it'll might make me feel better." Remove "might")
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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A fine chapter, but sad for Molly. The screen was cut so she would get out, but did the wild dog belong to whoever cut the screen? And was tis a plan to lure Emma out of the house and get her too?
Wendy
Edit:"Tell one of the assistances when you leave"(assistants)
"I'm taking a shower. Maybe it'll might make me feel better." Remove "might")
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the catches. I have made the corrections. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness Barbara this is a tragic turn of events and these wild dogs can be dangerous. This is an exciting and nail biting chapter Barbara, entertaining and realistic, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Oh my goodness Barbara this is a tragic turn of events and these wild dogs can be dangerous. This is an exciting and nail biting chapter Barbara, entertaining and realistic, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
He had moved Molly to a large pillow on the floor. An IV remained attached. Ace lay next to her. He raised his head when they entered and then lowered it. [Awww, this is written so tenderly.]
This was a great chapter with enough left unresolved to carry interest over to next chapter. Meanwhile Emma's father lets Seth know that he sees Emma's interest in him.
I needed this chapter today!
Jay
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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He had moved Molly to a large pillow on the floor. An IV remained attached. Ace lay next to her. He raised his head when they entered and then lowered it. [Awww, this is written so tenderly.]
This was a great chapter with enough left unresolved to carry interest over to next chapter. Meanwhile Emma's father lets Seth know that he sees Emma's interest in him.
I needed this chapter today!
Jay
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm still praying for you.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
The action and suspense is really picking up to a high lever. We see little Molly attacked by some sort of wild dog. Her life is hanging by a thread as Ace watches on.
Poor Emma is having trouble making ends meet, but has a lot of people looking out for her.
You did a great job of bringing us closer to Emma as a person and what emotions she's having to work through.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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The action and suspense is really picking up to a high lever. We see little Molly attacked by some sort of wild dog. Her life is hanging by a thread as Ace watches on.
Poor Emma is having trouble making ends meet, but has a lot of people looking out for her.
You did a great job of bringing us closer to Emma as a person and what emotions she's having to work through.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Still a great read. Sorry, I'm a bit late. Getting pretty dramatic. Now you have this so-called old boyfriend and the Crown Cruiser, whoever they are. Just one area to look at. Maybe it'll [might] make me feel better."
OR Maybe it['ll] might make me feel better."
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Still a great read. Sorry, I'm a bit late. Getting pretty dramatic. Now you have this so-called old boyfriend and the Crown Cruiser, whoever they are. Just one area to look at. Maybe it'll [might] make me feel better."
OR Maybe it['ll] might make me feel better."
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the catch. I have made the change. I appreciate the help.