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Comment from damommy
It's wonder you weren't crushed by all those fallen trees and limbs. I hope you were able to retrieve something from your campsite. I'm eager to see what happens next.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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It's wonder you weren't crushed by all those fallen trees and limbs. I hope you were able to retrieve something from your campsite. I'm eager to see what happens next.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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It was a struggle to get out. There wasn't much to find considering the wind could probably have blown the whole part to another continent!
I will write next about the struggle to get out. Thank you for reading. I appreciate your concern and your compassion especially. And i'm very happy to have you reading along thank you again!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh wow, Lea, nature is making the decision for you now. You were on the brink but this has confirmed, if you are going to survive, you must go. The storm sounded horrendous and very relatable to anyone living in that sort of climate. The wind is cruel and will destroy anything in its way. All excellently conveyed and the reader could sense your vulnerability and powerlessness in contrast. A small edit - 'rein' in as opposed to 'reign' in (a common error but think of its equestrian roots from the reins of a horse). Otherwise flawlessly written with this dramatic climax from which a calm resolution will now have to be made. Everything happens for a purpose. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Oh wow, Lea, nature is making the decision for you now. You were on the brink but this has confirmed, if you are going to survive, you must go. The storm sounded horrendous and very relatable to anyone living in that sort of climate. The wind is cruel and will destroy anything in its way. All excellently conveyed and the reader could sense your vulnerability and powerlessness in contrast. A small edit - 'rein' in as opposed to 'reign' in (a common error but think of its equestrian roots from the reins of a horse). Otherwise flawlessly written with this dramatic climax from which a calm resolution will now have to be made. Everything happens for a purpose. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Again, thank you for this wonderful writing and wonderful review gave me nice big smile. Those are so great cause you don't get them very much. I hope you're having a good one!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh dear. This falls under the heading: People make plans, and G-d laughs. You were starting to think about leaving anyway, but this sure sped up the time frame! Yikes! Sounds as if you were lucky to have been spared. And how disorienting to have no sense of direction because of how different it all looked! Riveting chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Oh dear. This falls under the heading: People make plans, and G-d laughs. You were starting to think about leaving anyway, but this sure sped up the time frame! Yikes! Sounds as if you were lucky to have been spared. And how disorienting to have no sense of direction because of how different it all looked! Riveting chapter.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Again, Rachel, thank you, I hope I'm able to keep everyone interested in riveted. My life seems like a hurricane in itself so it certainly was for a long time. Many things I had to learn the hard way but learn I did. Thank you again hope your evening is great!
Comment from Jim Wile
I couldn't imagine how much worse your story could get for you, Lea, but I certainly didn't anticipate this. You were right; your decision about what to do was made for you. There is no way you can continue living in the forest now. I guess you will have to try to put your trust in someone to recognize the position you are now in and help you. There is only so much a 15-year-old can do to survive on her own. I just hope you find an understanding individual who can truly help you and not just try to send you back where you had escaped from.
This is such an agonizingly frightening tale you are telling so well. - Jim
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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I couldn't imagine how much worse your story could get for you, Lea, but I certainly didn't anticipate this. You were right; your decision about what to do was made for you. There is no way you can continue living in the forest now. I guess you will have to try to put your trust in someone to recognize the position you are now in and help you. There is only so much a 15-year-old can do to survive on her own. I just hope you find an understanding individual who can truly help you and not just try to send you back where you had escaped from.
This is such an agonizingly frightening tale you are telling so well. - Jim
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Jim, I'm trying to get all the feelings in the actions across through the entire time I live in that prison. I hope that people see the signs and others are perhaps themselves, but help someone that's my goal makes everything. I appreciate you so very much, and thank you again. I will see you in the next chapter!
Comment from BethShelby
Wow! You told this story in such a real way, I felt as if I was there. I was in a tornado once that destroyed my home and all the trees and building around it and took me up the air and back down. I know the feeling of having sense of direction when the world has changed around you. You could have easily been crushed to death. I'm anxious to know where you went from there.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Wow! You told this story in such a real way, I felt as if I was there. I was in a tornado once that destroyed my home and all the trees and building around it and took me up the air and back down. I know the feeling of having sense of direction when the world has changed around you. You could have easily been crushed to death. I'm anxious to know where you went from there.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Oh wow, that must have scared the c*** out of you. Have you lifted up like that holy smokes! It would've me for sure.
Oh I was scared shaking from head to toe and that was cool. What to do with myself? But when in the situation, you have no way to get out of but with your own wits you do so I will talk about that. I appreciate your fine review again. You're awesome rating. Thanks again! Have an awesome night too LOL.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness Lea, this must have been a terrifying moment for you as we cannot fight against the elements as we will surly lose. You were brave and you made the decision to get out whilst you could.
I loved your last line here that summed up your fear:
It wasn't the unknown I was afraid of.... it was the known...
Another fine chapter in your life story when you were young, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Oh my goodness Lea, this must have been a terrifying moment for you as we cannot fight against the elements as we will surly lose. You were brave and you made the decision to get out whilst you could.
I loved your last line here that summed up your fear:
It wasn't the unknown I was afraid of.... it was the known...
Another fine chapter in your life story when you were young, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Again thank you so much dolly so happy have you along for the journey!