Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

This is a delightful one-line poem. I wish I could make such a wonderful idea come alive in just one line. I can almost hear the laughter her. It brought to mind my childhood homes.

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023

Thank you, Verna. I am happy it made you think about your childhood home, that's what haiku is supposed to do. (*=*)

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Comment from Lordinajamjar

Exceptional

I love this offering, Gypsy.

It really touches on memories of fond youth. It makes this reader reflect and realize that our memories maybe picked up and stored in places with which we had strong emotional links.
Maybe this could explain ghosts and haunting.

Well done
John

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023

Thank you, John. I am happy it made you think about your childhood home, that's what haiku is supposed to do. (*=*)

I appreciate the exceptional six stars review

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh wow! That's creepy! In just those few lines you take me back to my childhood in quite a haunting and sad way, remembering the joy that is now embedded forever in the fabric of my first home. Very evocative and a great entry for the club! Debbie. PS I was pleased to hear that your son is making a good recovery. That must be such a relief for you:)

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023

Thank you, Debbie. Yes, my son is home and doing better. I am relief. It was very scary. I appreciate all the prayers from fanstory friends.

Thank you, Debbie. I am sorry it made you think about your sad childhood home, I can relate.

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