Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

I certainly didn't expect Ben to be convicted and sentenced to be hanged. Even though the jury was threatened to vote for guilty, it may be ignored or not do anything in time to save him. Honesty was not highly valued.

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023

Thank you.
And all too often honesty is still not valued, I'm afraid.

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

I don't like this verdict, the prosecutor, the bad juror, I want to jump through my computer into your computer and correct the story. The judge found out that the doctor was insincere and lied on the stand. The gangster had septicemia and that killed him not his kick. Case closed. Karen

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023

Huge smiley face here!!!!!
Thank you for your great review!
But stick around. Ben has a Divine calling.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 12-Oct-2023

I know, the story isn't over, but you have whipped me into a fury on Ben's behalf. This people that say Christian writing is dull do not tead the good stuff kike yours do they?
Sure some is dull, but a lot of main stream is beyond boring.