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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The forest Cradle"Biography/Supernatural
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Comment from damommy
You were a brave girl. If you had done baby-sitting, I'm guessing you were at least fourteen at this time. I'm glad your night in the pup tent gave you some rest. Looking forward to the next installment.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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You were a brave girl. If you had done baby-sitting, I'm guessing you were at least fourteen at this time. I'm glad your night in the pup tent gave you some rest. Looking forward to the next installment.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review. And I appreciate your insightful comments and your compassion. Yes, I was 14 going on 15 at the time. Thank you so much for reading and going on this journey with me. I appreciate your support and the support of others on this site. It's been amazing, thank you again for reading and for offering your comments. I'm always happy to receive your review, thank you again!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from JSD
An excellent piece, Lea. I love the prologues and the epilogues where you refer to the experience of the writing process and what it's doing for you. Your bravery shines out of this whole piece. Well done. X
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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An excellent piece, Lea. I love the prologues and the epilogues where you refer to the experience of the writing process and what it's doing for you. Your bravery shines out of this whole piece. Well done. X
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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That is a very fine compliment, John. Thank you so much for that and I'll say again for your support. I am very much appreciative! There will be one more kick at the cat before I get partial seperation from them but that is soon to be written. Thank you again john always happy to receive your reviews have a great night!
Comment from JT traveller
Yes! Give yourself the permission to live your life on your terms. You have superseded the people who treated you so unkindly, who taught you not to trust. A gritty, difficult piece to write but write it you just. I commend your courage. Take care, Jacqueline xx
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Yes! Give yourself the permission to live your life on your terms. You have superseded the people who treated you so unkindly, who taught you not to trust. A gritty, difficult piece to write but write it you just. I commend your courage. Take care, Jacqueline xx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you Jacqueline! I appreciate your insight which is great too, always has been. Your words are encouraging. Yes, they are and I shall keep writing. There is more to say much more.
Too young to leave home Too old to stay. Thank you again I hope you have the best night you rock!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
Most people don't understand just what all goes in to spending a night out in the woods. A tent is just the beginning. Of course as you mentioned, firewood or some other source of heat is a necessity, as well as water, and it doesn't hurt to have an idea for a latrine if you're going to be in an area for awhile. I've never heard the word hoochies to describe anything other than the vinyl lures that look like little octopi that I used to use to catch salmon. They come in so many colors and some glow in the dark or change color under water. I love hoochies. I keep saying that I'm going to make a hoocie mobile, but I need a good base on which to hang them. Maybe a ships wheel if I can find one that's not too expensive. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Hello Lea,
Most people don't understand just what all goes in to spending a night out in the woods. A tent is just the beginning. Of course as you mentioned, firewood or some other source of heat is a necessity, as well as water, and it doesn't hurt to have an idea for a latrine if you're going to be in an area for awhile. I've never heard the word hoochies to describe anything other than the vinyl lures that look like little octopi that I used to use to catch salmon. They come in so many colors and some glow in the dark or change color under water. I love hoochies. I keep saying that I'm going to make a hoocie mobile, but I need a good base on which to hang them. Maybe a ships wheel if I can find one that's not too expensive. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you Tom so much for this fine review! And for sharing I appreciate that too. I'm happy to have you read this and come along for the journey. You have a blessed evening too, and thank you again!
Comment from LovnPeace
You are quite the writer IMHO, Ir makes me jealous reading it. I tried writing mine. How boring. Just the facts mam, No imaginative drawing in. XO Blessings. B
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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You are quite the writer IMHO, Ir makes me jealous reading it. I tried writing mine. How boring. Just the facts mam, No imaginative drawing in. XO Blessings. B
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Lol. Thank you so much! Kind of you to say! Thank you for your fine review and your great comments. Thank you!
Comment from kahpot
This is a wonderful though unsettling read, unsettling because the reader (me) is left with images of what drove this girl to this point, the way you have included "flashbacks" keeps us knowing you are only a young girl, I don't read many stories, but I am happy I caught this one at the beginning, very well written, I look forward to reading more****kahpot
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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This is a wonderful though unsettling read, unsettling because the reader (me) is left with images of what drove this girl to this point, the way you have included "flashbacks" keeps us knowing you are only a young girl, I don't read many stories, but I am happy I caught this one at the beginning, very well written, I look forward to reading more****kahpot
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind review and great comments! Have a read at Ghost this will bring you to the why. Thank you again! I appreciate it! Have a great night!