2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "The Goddess of Autumn".
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We had such a warm day yesterday here in Britain that Autumn seems a long way off! I enjoyed your ambient post about the change in mood as Autumnal wind sweeps away the summer heat, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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We had such a warm day yesterday here in Britain that Autumn seems a long way off! I enjoyed your ambient post about the change in mood as Autumnal wind sweeps away the summer heat, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
You captured the essence of the seasonal change succinctly in your opening lines.
Cool, crisp breeze and the waning bright ruby leaves that will depart very soon now.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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You captured the essence of the seasonal change succinctly in your opening lines.
Cool, crisp breeze and the waning bright ruby leaves that will depart very soon now.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It feels like the summer is waning today even though it's sunny. The forecast is for cool rains to start soon. Lovely presentation and great use of personification!
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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It feels like the summer is waning today even though it's sunny. The forecast is for cool rains to start soon. Lovely presentation and great use of personification!
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you, big sister. I'm happy you like it.
Love
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a lovely poem. There is something almost royal about autumn. The rich bold colors, the slight chill to the air. This showed the command this season has over others. All seasons have their beauty but autumn is special. Gretchen
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What a lovely poem. There is something almost royal about autumn. The rich bold colors, the slight chill to the air. This showed the command this season has over others. All seasons have their beauty but autumn is special. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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I agree with you, autumn is my favorite season...I love the colors and smells.
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from JPGeo
This free verse brings all of the senses into play. The words are beautifully poetic and scintillating. Gypsy, nobody does presentation like you and it is just eye candy given the tools we all have to work with. Congrats, beautiful.
John
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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This free verse brings all of the senses into play. The words are beautifully poetic and scintillating. Gypsy, nobody does presentation like you and it is just eye candy given the tools we all have to work with. Congrats, beautiful.
John
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, John. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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