Ghost
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
I want this one to win SOO bad!! It is superior writing in every way there is. So cogent and well-organized, so EXACTLY what someone that age would be thinking. You have a handle on it perfectly, Lea. You were so full of HEART and STRENGTH and WISDOM (that presented in the form of intuition at that age, but it's wisdom.) This book is RIVETING. Everyone who reads this will be cheering for this brave little girl (you) because you've been given a raw deal, and you're trying so hard to emancipate yourself from it. I hope you don't get sick of me saying this, but you are SUCH a remarkable person...all you've accomplished, all you are on track to accomplish STILL. I am just so grateful for our burgeoning friendship. xoxox
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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I want this one to win SOO bad!! It is superior writing in every way there is. So cogent and well-organized, so EXACTLY what someone that age would be thinking. You have a handle on it perfectly, Lea. You were so full of HEART and STRENGTH and WISDOM (that presented in the form of intuition at that age, but it's wisdom.) This book is RIVETING. Everyone who reads this will be cheering for this brave little girl (you) because you've been given a raw deal, and you're trying so hard to emancipate yourself from it. I hope you don't get sick of me saying this, but you are SUCH a remarkable person...all you've accomplished, all you are on track to accomplish STILL. I am just so grateful for our burgeoning friendship. xoxox
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Rachelle you do me great honor. You really do. You message and review It's so much more than I thought and you give me the heart encouraged to carry on. I will always be thankful for that and for you thank you again!
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Honestly, Lea; that's like thanking me for eating ice cream. xoxox Love you.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This real-life story is more provocative than fiction. I hope you include in your story how you happened to be put in a group home, and why you were released. No child should have to experience the horrors you and your sisters endured. I can feel your release as you analyze what took place and write your story out. I wish you the best in the contest, and hope you find even greater understanding as you proceed.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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This real-life story is more provocative than fiction. I hope you include in your story how you happened to be put in a group home, and why you were released. No child should have to experience the horrors you and your sisters endured. I can feel your release as you analyze what took place and write your story out. I wish you the best in the contest, and hope you find even greater understanding as you proceed.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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I so appreciate you and your kind comments and your great review. Yes, tomorrow will be revealed as we go along. Mention of you gotta seem to be good for me. It's going to come up and it was. In fact, the school finally, who stepped up and did something. It only lasted 3 weeks, though, and her mother had us lied to the social service. People about our stepfawhen that was done of course, they sent us back. Is more all on that as well. I so appreciate your kind support and your wonderful review. You're welcome to go through the field if you wish. I appreciate all your kind words of wisdom anuncompassionate remarks hook, you have an awesome evening!
Comment from royowen
Because I am the father of two daughters that I adore, I feel so sad for you, I just wanted to clutch my girls to me, along with their mother, they are God's greatest gifts to me, apart from Himself, beautifully but very sadly written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Because I am the father of two daughters that I adore, I feel so sad for you, I just wanted to clutch my girls to me, along with their mother, they are God's greatest gifts to me, apart from Himself, beautifully but very sadly written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Roy I appreciate your comments your compassion and your heart felt remarks! Continue to ride it as it folded out as best as I can. It's a 2 fold reward really one I get to unload, put it out in the air take some of the power away from it and then second, if anyone is helped I too, I'm helped. Thank you again roy I hope your day is great!
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Well done
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This clarifies the nature of your family background and that wonderful time when you were given some sanctuary and you and your sisters were put into a group home. It was as though an enormous weight had been lifted. But it was not to last and the cruelty of having your young sister removed was obviously heart-breaking for you. Questions remained in your mind about your father and these were to preoccupy you for some time. Thank you for sharing this, Lea. Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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This clarifies the nature of your family background and that wonderful time when you were given some sanctuary and you and your sisters were put into a group home. It was as though an enormous weight had been lifted. But it was not to last and the cruelty of having your young sister removed was obviously heart-breaking for you. Questions remained in your mind about your father and these were to preoccupy you for some time. Thank you for sharing this, Lea. Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thank you again, Debbie for stopping by for reading and offering your kind comments. Once again, it is greatly appreciated! Many more chapters to come, I think I've got, like, 10 now. I will re-release chapter one. I hope you have a great night. Thank you again for reading as always. I appreciate your point of view and your support!
Comment from BethShelby
It is terrible when children have to live in fear. Is the child in the picture you? She looks a lot like the adult you and she looks afraid, like someone might hurt her at any time. This is good first chapter. It leaves me wanting to know more about this disfunctional family. I want to know what reason does the step-father have for hitting you. Does he do other thing that frighten you? Why were you taken from home? Why was it only temporary. Did the little sister come back? Maybe I learn this answers in a later chapter.
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It is terrible when children have to live in fear. Is the child in the picture you? She looks a lot like the adult you and she looks afraid, like someone might hurt her at any time. This is good first chapter. It leaves me wanting to know more about this disfunctional family. I want to know what reason does the step-father have for hitting you. Does he do other thing that frighten you? Why were you taken from home? Why was it only temporary. Did the little sister come back? Maybe I learn this answers in a later chapter.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Portfolio look, under bucks you'll see the story, ghost. The first few taptress are in order 1 through 4 I believe the other 3 are out of order but yet to come together in the story you're welcome to have a look, i thank you for your wonderful review. For your compassion and for reading, it is greatly appreciated by me!