Duchess Autumn
Meet an aristocrat.12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the metaphor for Autumn here with all its colour and spicy delights. The trees flouncing their skirts and the crimson apples, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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I enjoyed the metaphor for Autumn here with all its colour and spicy delights. The trees flouncing their skirts and the crimson apples, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Hi,Dolly. When I created the Duchess, I was thinking of the cast of DOWNTON ABBEY. I am very pleased you enjoyed the poem.
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Very inventive x
Comment from Eleri
This is an excellent poem with a great constant rhythm throughout. I just love the ideas behind it and your use of colour plus the idea of acorns being 'squirrel-pruned' is brilliant. The rhyming is good too. I wish you all the best in the contest
Eleri
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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This is an excellent poem with a great constant rhythm throughout. I just love the ideas behind it and your use of colour plus the idea of acorns being 'squirrel-pruned' is brilliant. The rhyming is good too. I wish you all the best in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Eleri, thank you so much for your marvelous praise of my poem and that galaxy of stars. Describing the Duchess was fun to do.
