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One Man's Calling

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Following God

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Comment from Jay Squires
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Seems like this should be shown on one of those big Cinerama screens from the 60s, like Ben-Hur, but in a more contemporary setting. Well choreographed.

"Lord, please do not send your angels to obliterate our adversaries. [LOL, sounds like Ben's doing some orchestrating for God!]

This was a fun chapter, Wayne. Shows the power of prayer on a grand scale.

Jay



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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you.
    I was imagining myself one of the bad guys and hearing a respected/feared man of God pray aloud.