A Particular Friendship
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Another Kind of Training"We meet Lizzy who has just come out of the convent
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Liz,
What a wonderful story. It flowed well and was really seeet, enjoyable by kids and adults.
Liz, the paragraph beginning, "as his familiarity," is written twice.
Otherwise, this is a very nice story.
Blessings,
Cindy
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Liz,
What a wonderful story. It flowed well and was really seeet, enjoyable by kids and adults.
Liz, the paragraph beginning, "as his familiarity," is written twice.
Otherwise, this is a very nice story.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your alert review. That repeat was unintended. I'm glad you enjoyed it.