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Comment from Jim Wile
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The showdown is coming, and it promises to be a good one. Although Ben's side has agreed to use no weapons except possibly for loaded gloves, how will the other side respond to this request? I'm guessing not too positively, but we'll see.

This is a nice buildup to the coming event, and we'll see how strong Ben's message is if he can end up converting the Colossimo gang. That would really be something!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you. Watch God's mysterious ways.
    Although as humans, we often get in His way.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Angelo saw him and helped him to a SEATED position. (change from seating position)

A few hours LATER Ben was of a different mind (change from laterm)

Given the way the Lord has been stepping in to take these characters out, I'd just pray and trust that will continue.

Another good chapter, Wayne.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you. And thank you for the corrections and improvements.
    Afraid Ben might have gotten a little ahead of God a couple times.
Comment from royowen
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We're in the beginnings of a revival here Wayne, you seem to know a lot about street evangelism. I've done music in the streets of Australia, taking the gospel to the streets, the message of God's love and desire to save the worst of people is such a simple thing, beautifully written, blessing Roy

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
reply by royowen on 28-Sep-2023
    Well done
Comment from JSD
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Wow! More great action here, and a quick amputation to boot (ha!). Excellent, as usual, and thank you once again for continuing with this magnificent tale.

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you for your very nice review.