Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Chapter 19 A"Can faith guide our path?
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Comment from Wendy G
That Peggy B is a piece of work. Maybe she should pair up with Ronnie. Emma and Seth seem to be settlinbbjnto a smooth relationship now, but I think as an older man he will keep but probably not wear his friendship bracelet. But she has signalled her feelings for him, bag that she values his friendship. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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That Peggy B is a piece of work. Maybe she should pair up with Ronnie. Emma and Seth seem to be settlinbbjnto a smooth relationship now, but I think as an older man he will keep but probably not wear his friendship bracelet. But she has signalled her feelings for him, bag that she values his friendship. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Good to see you. You missed out on the sixes, unfortunately. make it a virtual six. Can't wait to learn more about this Calhoun creep. Still a good story.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Good to see you. You missed out on the sixes, unfortunately. make it a virtual six. Can't wait to learn more about this Calhoun creep. Still a good story.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Virtual sixes are nice. I will be back to my Sunday postings on Sunday. LOL
Comment from JSD
I know you're too writer an' all that but I find myself wanting something to happen. Sorry!!!! Nevertheless the dialogue is interesting and authentic and creates characters through your skills as a writer.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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I know you're too writer an' all that but I find myself wanting something to happen. Sorry!!!! Nevertheless the dialogue is interesting and authentic and creates characters through your skills as a writer.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
I am also the one who waits for others ,always .
Peggy is up to something nasty I feel.And Emma's ex appearing suddenly also foretell an unfavouable wind...
Well written in your usual stylish way.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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I am also the one who waits for others ,always .
Peggy is up to something nasty I feel.And Emma's ex appearing suddenly also foretell an unfavouable wind...
Well written in your usual stylish way.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
A well written chapter. I understand you are following a proven formula for your novels. Your fans love it as it. Keep up the good work. An author's job is to make the fans (readers) happy while sticking to their vision.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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A well written chapter. I understand you are following a proven formula for your novels. Your fans love it as it. Keep up the good work. An author's job is to make the fans (readers) happy while sticking to their vision.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. It sells novels, so works for me.
Comment from Jay Squires
Two new wrinkles. Ronnie and the return of Peggy. Too bad they couldn't hook up. It would save everyone a lot of grief.
Frowning Seth said, "They broke up." [You might want to put a comma in after Frowning so it won't look like his new nickname, Frowning Seth.]
How the Crayons Saved the Rainbow [Should be italicized, not emboldened.]
Looks like there'll be some explosiveness next week!
Jay
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Two new wrinkles. Ronnie and the return of Peggy. Too bad they couldn't hook up. It would save everyone a lot of grief.
Frowning Seth said, "They broke up." [You might want to put a comma in after Frowning so it won't look like his new nickname, Frowning Seth.]
How the Crayons Saved the Rainbow [Should be italicized, not emboldened.]
Looks like there'll be some explosiveness next week!
Jay
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I will fix both of those. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Nicely paced and I have not picked up any mistakes. You are getting quite a bevvy of characters and the story seems to be evolving nicely. Will look out for the next chapter.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Nicely paced and I have not picked up any mistakes. You are getting quite a bevvy of characters and the story seems to be evolving nicely. Will look out for the next chapter.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Huh, "sorry I'm late, couldn't decide what to wear"... I'll refrain from what I was going to call her. Nice try Peggy but it won't work. Seth's got the bracelet which means a lot more to him then you'll know!
Great chapter, Barbara.
Is this a correction needed:
They eventually made up. I'd (I) prepared a different story,
Looking forward to the next post.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Huh, "sorry I'm late, couldn't decide what to wear"... I'll refrain from what I was going to call her. Nice try Peggy but it won't work. Seth's got the bracelet which means a lot more to him then you'll know!
Great chapter, Barbara.
Is this a correction needed:
They eventually made up. I'd (I) prepared a different story,
Looking forward to the next post.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I made the correction.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Emma's high school boyfriend doesn't seem like the kind of guy she would ever like, but I guess all girls make a few mistakes in their choices. Peggy proved herself rather brainless as she is late to class. Every little thing is driving Seth and Emma together.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Emma's high school boyfriend doesn't seem like the kind of guy she would ever like, but I guess all girls make a few mistakes in their choices. Peggy proved herself rather brainless as she is late to class. Every little thing is driving Seth and Emma together.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I want to smack Peggy on the head. Peggy and Ronnie ought to get together, if they could obsess about each other, maybe they could leave the nice folks alone. But, then again, without conflict, you have a dull story hahahaha. Karen
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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I want to smack Peggy on the head. Peggy and Ronnie ought to get together, if they could obsess about each other, maybe they could leave the nice folks alone. But, then again, without conflict, you have a dull story hahahaha. Karen
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. LOL
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