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Following God

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Comment from papa55mike
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If we can just get quiet for a moment, God will speak to us. Please check these lines; "Ben chuckled. "I do need, remove the quotation mark before Ben. millionaires,for the Golden; you need a space after the comma. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
    Thank you. I appreciate your help.
Comment from Wendy G
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The wordless book was still being used when I was younger and it's not a bad way to start a basic conversation with an interested person. We used it in Sunday School and children's club classes.Another excellent chapter. So many ways for a committed Christian to make a meaningful contribution to society, not only spiritually but in all aspects of life, and care for nature.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
    Thank you. Exactly what I'd hoped from this chapter.
Comment from JSD
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'In God's Hands' would be a perfect alternative title for these stories. I love how Ben just trusts that all will be well. It's a graphic example of faith. Thanks for this latest instalment, Wayne.

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
    Thank YOU for your very kind review.