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Watch Fall Switch Now

A Rondeau

13 total reviews 
Comment from JSD
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Great use of the rondeau form. Your rhymes work perfectly and this has a lyrical and lilting sense of the season. Well done and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
    Thank you, JSD. I appreciate your praise of my Rondeau.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.

Best wishes!

Alexandra



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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much, Alexandra. I appreciate your praise of my Rondeau.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This rondeau, Watch Fall Switch Now, has the proper formatting and brings the readers in to witness another season transitioning into one that makes the former feel better.

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much, Bill, for your review of my Rondeau.