Comment from JSD

Excellent

Great use of the rondeau form. Your rhymes work perfectly and this has a lyrical and lilting sense of the season. Well done and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you, JSD. I appreciate your praise of my Rondeau.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.

Best wishes!

Alexandra



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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Alexandra. I appreciate your praise of my Rondeau.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This rondeau, Watch Fall Switch Now, has the proper formatting and brings the readers in to witness another season transitioning into one that makes the former feel better.

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Bill, for your review of my Rondeau.