A Particular Friendship
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Crank that Volume"We meet Lizzy who has just come out of the convent
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Comment from BethShelby
I like learned a bit about your life before you went into the convent and the relationship you had with your father. Growing up in most families is so easy. There are alway relationship problem whether with parrents or with friends. I look forward to reading more of your story.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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I like learned a bit about your life before you went into the convent and the relationship you had with your father. Growing up in most families is so easy. There are alway relationship problem whether with parrents or with friends. I look forward to reading more of your story.
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your compassionate review.
Comment from JSD
An intriguing and well written piece. I like the way you take the reader into the mind of Lizzie, and I enjoyed the thread of music that weaves through this post. Well done.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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An intriguing and well written piece. I like the way you take the reader into the mind of Lizzie, and I enjoyed the thread of music that weaves through this post. Well done.
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your compassionate review.