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Lord, just a word.

A quick prayer

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Comment from JSD
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A heartfelt and impassioned plea, Terry. Thank you for sharing this. My heart goes out to her and I will raise a prayer for her. The 'soreheads' can do one, as we say in the UK.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Yep, they can. Thank you. Terry.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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What a lovely prayer and an honest one. Soreheads or not, none of us wish anyone to suffer. Our prayers are with her as she experiences more difficulties.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Carol, thank you very much for your review. Terry.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Well, this could actually be for several people and if I know you? It probably is.

Good job here. The fact that you care enough to ask, regardless of where you are it says a millions words.

D

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    Douglas, thank you. Terry
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Terry,
I'm encouraged by the many people on Fan Story who are compassionate about their fellow writers, and share in their pain. The willingness of so many to intervene on your friend's behalf speaks volumes about the people who write here. I'll join you and others in lifting your friend before the Lord and pray that He will act quickly to bring her relief. Thanks for caring enough to share.
Have a blessed day.
Tom

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    Tom, thank you! Terry
Comment from nomi338
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I concur, but I have been told that even though God knows who you are referring to, it moves him even more when you mention someone by name. The reason for that is when you mention them by name, that makes your request even more personal and that gives your prayer even more power.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    Nomi, thank you for the review. Terry
Comment from BethShelby
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That sounds like a call for prayer. You know these FanStory people are willing to pray for anyone who needs it and I'd like to add my prayer to yours. Since you don't mention a name I'll just ask God to send some help and encouragement to Terry's friend. I know God knows who I mean. Thanks for letting us know.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    Beth, thank you. You got it right. Terry
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an excellent story and prayer to God. I enjoyed reading it. I think I can relate in some way. People here do need to write better. When I offered Fan Story to create club to help people write better (I have a master's degree in Literacy Reading, Writing), Fan Story suggested I create a contest. They did not understand. As a past teacher I do not enjoy that others can not write well. Your presentation is very good, too. You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader. The best we can do is pray for them lol.

Best wishes!

Alexandra


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    Alex, thank you! Terry
Comment from Ulla
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First of all, I would like to thank you for doing this for a fellow writer. I don't know who the writer is, but the most important is that you heard her plea, and stands up for her. Thanks a lot for doing this, Terry, and reminding us to become a better person. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    Ulla, thank you, lovely lady! Terry
Comment from LJbutterfly
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May God continue to bless and keep you. This public prayer is such a gracious gesture for one of our special, selfless friends on FanStory. This prayer shows how we have bonded as a tight knit family of writers. I join you in prayer for our friend and family member's health and strength.

Matthew 18:20 When two or three are gathered together in My name, I am there in the midst of them.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    Bless you dear lady! Terry
Comment from jmdg1954
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Terry,
Good afternoon.
I don't know who this writer is, regardless I will keep her in my thoughts and prayers.

In regards to these sore heads, as far as I'm concerned they can go suck a raw egg! This site is not to earn extra $$$.

We writers and wanna be writers like myself are here to learn, write stories or poems, make a few friends who we'll never meet, have a laugh or two and call it a day.

Great post, sorry to rant.

Go JETS....
John

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    John, thank you for the six stars and your wonderful review! I will share with you, this was not the story I planned to post today. Ironically, that story involves an egg. Maybe next week.

    When I got the email from the lady last night, I felt
    I needed to write the poem and post it.

    And of course?Go Cowboys!