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Birthday Poem for our Special K

A Merry~go~Rhyme for Aussie

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Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Debi, this is a beautiful and wonderful tribute to our one and only Aussie who we all admire. Your poem reads and flows well and has good
rhyming within. Of special note:

A celebrated artist since the age of just fifteen
(Just like our Mackenzie)

Also:
She keeps Jesus first in her life, and for others she prays
(We all could use a few more prayers. Thank you, Aussie.)

Well done. A pleasure to read. This is a birthday tribute that anyone would be proud to receive. Xo. M







 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi Margaret - I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thank you too for your gracious six stars.
    Thanks again, my very dear sotu.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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Terrific example of Merry-go rhymes!!

I've not heard of this so thanks for the author notes.

The photo gives your writing depth and helped me make a personal connection to special K,(not sure who that is) ;)

She's had quite a life so far, so full and rewarding, what a friend you are to share it with us.

Thanks for this offering!


 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi Kitty - I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. The Merry Go Rhyme was one I made up after joining in w Sally?s Circus poems. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
reply by K.L. Rockquemore on 18-Sep-2023
    Your most welcome;)
Comment from aryr
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The picture was fantastic and the video was delightful, which I watch fully, Debi. This was a wonderful tribute to Aussie / Kay- Happy Birthday Kay!!! ð???ð???ð???ð???ð?§¸ Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi Ali, I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
reply by aryr on 18-Sep-2023
    What a kind review? You are so very welcome, Debi.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I enjoyed reading this beautiful birthday tribute to Kay (Aussie). As usual, you included many interesting aspects of her life, and did it in your delightful Merry-go-Rhyme format. I appreciate the creativity and work this requires.

According to Aussie's posts, her grandmother was Aboriginal, and I love when she explains Aboriginal folklore. To our Aussie I say, Happy Birthday, and I hope you have many more healthy and prosperous years.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi Lorraine,, I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I love your info about her grandmother.. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Comment from TPAC
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I do, too. The writer, relates this person fearless courage, announcing valid efforts, she confronts in this life, not allowing faults to over ride them with emotions of pity. These thoughts, finding encouraging to my own attitudes: and sufferings.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi TPAC, as a forty year sufferer of lupus and crippled for many of them, Kay and I have been supporting each other for sometime. She too would be happy to hear from you! I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your compassionate words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
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Comment from Lisasview
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Hi Debi,
Just got back from 6 days visiting Dali's trilogy ... my favorite part of the trip was seeing his summer home... it was fabulous.
So nice to come back and read another one of you delightful poems.
I love this line because thats me...always up for a new adventure!
If you run from challenges, you'll miss a great adventure
Lisa

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Wow Lisa, what an experience that must have been. Sounds wonderful!
    It's good to have you back.
    I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
reply by Lisasview on 18-Sep-2023
    Yes, I am back and raring to go ...
    I have so much to do today ...
    Raining which is perfect for a day indoors and working on accounts, poem, etc.
    Maybe I will even enter another contest.
    The 4 line poem contest has not been voted on yet... Seems like quite a while since I entered it?
    Lisa
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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This is such a lovely birthday poem for Kay, she is such a lovely lady, and a friend to everyone. I'm sure she is going to love this one, you've put so much into her poem, and what you said is truly Kay. Well done, Debi. Love and hugs. Sandra x

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    My dear Sandra, I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Comment from Sally Law
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What a great Merry-go-Round poem for our Special K, Debi dear! She really is special and such a talented poetess. The world is her concern in many of her poems.

Happy Birthday, Kay dear, our special Aussie friend! I hope you have a wonderful day the Aussie way with love and cake and fun stuff. Blessings abundant too!

Love & Blessings to you both!!
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi there Sally, I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. I also thank you for you gracious six stars!
    Thanks again, my very dear friend.
reply by Sally Law on 18-Sep-2023
    Most welcome, my dear! My pleasure as always. Blessings abundant this day! Love, Sal XOs
Comment from JSD
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(intact is one word)

This is a beautifully formed and structured poem of tribute. Well done. Lovely sentiment and bringing to the fore all the good work this lovely woman does. Excellent.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi John, first of all thank you for catching my typo with intact. I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
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Comment from Sanku
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Yet another example of your generosity .You have provided us with an insight into what Aussie is .I enjoy all her poems about Australia .She is also against hunting animals etc...
thank you for sharing..

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    Hi Santha, you mentioned she is against hunting animals. Is that just game hunts? I know here, we must hunt for food or the deer and other animals would cause even worse problems on the highways and the overpopulation would be disastrous. Its already such a danger for driving.
    I thank you so very much for the very kind review for my poem for Aussie. I appreciate all of your lovely words and I know she will enjoy reading them too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
reply by Sanku on 18-Sep-2023
    The English used to hunt fox etc as a hobby. The royalty used to be very keen on deer hunting. I don't know about now. They used to draw flak from animal protection groups.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
    It sounds like a government much like ours. Ours seems to think they can do what ever they wants too,
    Santha, thanks for the info.