Comment from karenina

Excellent

Or, perhaps both are true at the same time! Either way, your point of perspective is well received. We can not linger long in either...but look forward and put our best forward regardless of the whims of fate and weather!

Karenina

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

I think you're right; dwelling in either state for too long can be harmful. Thanks for the thoughtful response, Karenina :)

reply by karenina on 15-Sep-2023

You're most welcome...

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

Nicely done! You are really good at presentation from accompanying pictures to font size to colors and everything between. By the time I am actually reading your words, I am already in the mood to be receptive to the thought expressed. And you always deliver. ann

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Your comments are very kind, Ann. Thanks so much, Craig.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

A lovely four line poem. You get the syllables spot on and you make a nice point about the different ways of looking at the colour blue. Well done and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thank you for the well-wishes and the encouraging comments :)

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the colour blue... and i agree it could describe much!

cute little 4-line poem
may i suggest a blue background and white font? just a thought ;)

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thanks so much for the kind comments and good wishes, Shelley. I thought about doing the white/blue the other way, but I thought it might make me too blue ;-) Cheers, Craig

reply by shelley kaye on 14-Sep-2023

lol!!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Exactly! Either or, I love the color blue, it's soothing to look at and calming in my experience. I've felt blue too, although black is probably a better color to describe sadness. I wish you best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

I don't know... I've never heard "I feel black", but have heard "I feel blue" many times. Thanks for the good wishes :) Craig

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

So true .Blue is the shade of our mood some times and also the shade of sky
lets hope the mood wont last lonf .The syllable count is good.all the best

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thanks for the kind comments :)

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Beautifully done, Craig! This is quite layered and one gets even more the second time from your fine and evocative verse. It's all very meditative and calming. Thank you for this relaxing moment. And good luck in the contest - a strong contender! Debbie

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thanks for the lovely comments, Debbie. Much appreciated. Craig

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Oh, nice rhyming pattern inside of this Four Line Poem entry.
(Nice positioning of blue and hue)

I think this nature piece may be a contender. We shall see.
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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thanks very much, Douglas :) Craig