Cloud Meditations
Relaxing while looking at clouds. (1-5-5-9)26 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This entire presentation in shades of peaceful blue, is relaxing. As a person who actually meditates, I find the words of your poem, especially "fluffy pillows," triggers feelings of tranquility. Best wishes in the contest.
This entire presentation in shades of peaceful blue, is relaxing. As a person who actually meditates, I find the words of your poem, especially "fluffy pillows," triggers feelings of tranquility. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Yes! This post takes me back to those sweet days of summer as we watched to spy images in those fluffy white clouds. I have revisited that practice many times as an adult. Some kids never grow up. LOL Well done Lisa. Nancy:)
Yes! This post takes me back to those sweet days of summer as we watched to spy images in those fluffy white clouds. I have revisited that practice many times as an adult. Some kids never grow up. LOL Well done Lisa. Nancy:)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from Boogienights
You have a way with words that are so true. I love watching clouds when I can, I often see shapes in them, it's a lot of fun. Love the picture you included, best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
You have a way with words that are so true. I love watching clouds when I can, I often see shapes in them, it's a lot of fun. Love the picture you included, best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Thanks for your nice review and good wishes. I appreciate your time.
Comment from Loren .
So many dreams and flightful escapes from reality are found in these fluffy pillows. Surely God made them just for that. Gathering wool and dreaming of better things. Loren
So many dreams and flightful escapes from reality are found in these fluffy pillows. Surely God made them just for that. Gathering wool and dreaming of better things. Loren
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from Pantygynt
Truly a transport of delight, unless you happen to be the pilot of an aircraft as they can prove less merciful, resulting in some uncomfortable turbulence.
Truly a transport of delight, unless you happen to be the pilot of an aircraft as they can prove less merciful, resulting in some uncomfortable turbulence.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from JSD
Nice mix of metaphors here. Pillows and transport. Carry and restful. It all works really well and I reckon you have a good chance here for another win. Well done.
Nice mix of metaphors here. Pillows and transport. Carry and restful. It all works really well and I reckon you have a good chance here for another win. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautiful! Your 4 line verse is as soft and floaty as those clouds as they carry that dreamy imagination. Love your imagery of 'pillows' and what's so good is the fact that the imagery is so interwoven with the theme of the imagination. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Beautiful! Your 4 line verse is as soft and floaty as those clouds as they carry that dreamy imagination. Love your imagery of 'pillows' and what's so good is the fact that the imagery is so interwoven with the theme of the imagination. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, clouds are marvellous aren't they, when I was young I used to make up scenarios in my head,and imagined all sorts of things, castles and tournament going on up there, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Oh yes, clouds are marvellous aren't they, when I was young I used to make up scenarios in my head,and imagined all sorts of things, castles and tournament going on up there, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never thought of cloud as being restful Lisa but rather troublesome and threatening, but I expect the odd cloud in a blue sky can be considered wistful, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
I have never thought of cloud as being restful Lisa but rather troublesome and threatening, but I expect the odd cloud in a blue sky can be considered wistful, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent. Cleverly written, with a little subtle alliteration, and the pairing with that well chosen image is perfect. Sending best wishes for your entry. I think it should do well.
Wendy
Excellent. Cleverly written, with a little subtle alliteration, and the pairing with that well chosen image is perfect. Sending best wishes for your entry. I think it should do well.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023