2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "I Was Made For You".
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your free verse poem - Excellent picture presentation- poem has good flow- and tells a tale with a surprise ending- funny- made me laugh!
Good job AP
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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I like your free verse poem - Excellent picture presentation- poem has good flow- and tells a tale with a surprise ending- funny- made me laugh!
Good job AP
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. Very entertaining. The last line says it all, you are absolutely correct. I loved it. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. Very entertaining. The last line says it all, you are absolutely correct. I loved it. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
What a shocking last line. All the lines lead me to believe that the narrator speaks to a lover for whom all her delectable features should arouse him and confirm their closeness but instead he doesn't deserve her as he was not faithful.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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What a shocking last line. All the lines lead me to believe that the narrator speaks to a lover for whom all her delectable features should arouse him and confirm their closeness but instead he doesn't deserve her as he was not faithful.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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LoL ... it's supposed to be funny.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from jim vecchio
Wow! You really caught me on tht one! There should be an award for the most surprising final line on this site. You are right about tht husband remark. My situation was opposite; I didn't deserve my wife, but The Lord blessed me with her anyhow!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Wow! You really caught me on tht one! There should be an award for the most surprising final line on this site. You are right about tht husband remark. My situation was opposite; I didn't deserve my wife, but The Lord blessed me with her anyhow!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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I always enjoy your words and hugs!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I liked the line about the lying scum. Have never understood how people, men or women, can enjoy being unfaithful. This was a very romantic poem that turned ugly like many romances do. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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I liked the line about the lying scum. Have never understood how people, men or women, can enjoy being unfaithful. This was a very romantic poem that turned ugly like many romances do. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i was wondering why the pic looked like she had a black eye...
a great free verse about dv!
which should be talked about more
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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i was wondering why the pic looked like she had a black eye...
a great free verse about dv!
which should be talked about more
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs