Angels Unaware
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Comment from Douglas Goff
My goodness you have to be sure of what you ask for from God. You asked and he put you right on the battlefield. If that didn't solidify your belief nothing will.
I have had similiar prayers answered in very unexpected ways.
God bless you!
D
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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My goodness you have to be sure of what you ask for from God. You asked and he put you right on the battlefield. If that didn't solidify your belief nothing will.
I have had similiar prayers answered in very unexpected ways.
God bless you!
D
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from royowen
Our church is about to be thrust into the throws of revival, and as a member of our close knit prayer group I've been somehow thrust into its desire to bring our community into the miraculous and join with others in the worldwide awakening of the same. Therefore I'm following this story with great interest, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Just (to) leave us in the lurch 2: I didn't have time (to) run 3: Listen her(e) boy.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Our church is about to be thrust into the throws of revival, and as a member of our close knit prayer group I've been somehow thrust into its desire to bring our community into the miraculous and join with others in the worldwide awakening of the same. Therefore I'm following this story with great interest, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Just (to) leave us in the lurch 2: I didn't have time (to) run 3: Listen her(e) boy.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks!
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A pleasure
Comment from BethShelby
God answered your prayer for a ministry. It is amazing how quick we get results sometime when we truly sincere an almost desparate for an answer. You were the answer to their need and they were the answer to your need to be used. Beautifully written.
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God answered your prayer for a ministry. It is amazing how quick we get results sometime when we truly sincere an almost desparate for an answer. You were the answer to their need and they were the answer to your need to be used. Beautifully written.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks Beth!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This chapter is told so compellingly that the reader feels almost present at the scene, remembering how we used to view AIDS and the death sentence it used to represent. Your trepidation and fears are therefore fully understood not to mention the daunting implications that might follow for the children. Para starting : "I turned to look in the room "- I'm not sure if you meant "frail thin arm"; "Chris admonished his son..." -"Listen her(e) boy.."; 4th line from the bottom - "I was here to help (their) Mom" Enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing, Debbie
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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This chapter is told so compellingly that the reader feels almost present at the scene, remembering how we used to view AIDS and the death sentence it used to represent. Your trepidation and fears are therefore fully understood not to mention the daunting implications that might follow for the children. Para starting : "I turned to look in the room "- I'm not sure if you meant "frail thin arm"; "Chris admonished his son..." -"Listen her(e) boy.."; 4th line from the bottom - "I was here to help (their) Mom" Enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing, Debbie
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks for help editing. I made some notes and have some fixes. Appreciate your encouraging words.