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One Man's Calling

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Following God

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Ben's mission has certainly expanded. He has so many irons in the fire he must need the Holy Spirit to help him keep track of them. It seems as if he has an increasingly greater impact on each area he moves to.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
    Not the youth who loved Livvy!
    Thank you for your fine review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Ben has it all to contend with here: rats, dead bodies, Chinese gangs and p prostitutes. But nothing deters him on his mission and he always has the right approach to get things done. Meanwhile, there is some hope that Henry will bring about social improvements. Another fine chapter, Wayne, and so interesting that there is a factual basis for much of your story. Many thanks, Debbie

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
    Thank you. It was fun applying the research.
Comment from JSD
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Just wades in without a thought where he sees a problem. Love it. What a dude. Another great episode and it looks like the political scene is improving too. Love reading this so much.

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
    Thank you so much!!!!!!