Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your four line modern Haiku- excellent picture presentation- good syllable count- simple theme - good focus on a moment in time- rain on the old tin roof- actually I play this on YouTube occasionally-sound of rain and Thunder- makes me sleep-
Good job - AP

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
there's is nothing like the meditative sound of rain on the roof... hmmmmm, well, except when you're trying to watch the TV.

A clever composition in joining the tune with such a visual metaphor.

I enjoyed the image you painted for me..., for us, to wash our souls upon.

With our thoughts we create...
the sound of replenishment.

Warm regards,
James.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

I love the sound and smell of rain. Thank you, James. It's always a pleasure to read your reviews. I like your view of life.

I hope you have a wonderful weekend with Jade in your paradise.

Abracitos y besitos

Marival
"Try to be a rainbow in someone's cloud." -
Maya Angelou