The waves
The ocean waves.62 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Belated Happy Birthday Willie! There is something very pleasing, almost meditative about your fine verse. I love the little story that unfolds about nature's rhythmic, relentless ways. Well done! Debbie
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Belated Happy Birthday Willie! There is something very pleasing, almost meditative about your fine verse. I love the little story that unfolds about nature's rhythmic, relentless ways. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good entry for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest you have written us very well it rhymes nicely, and you have presented it in a beautiful manner. Patricia.
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This is a very good entry for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest you have written us very well it rhymes nicely, and you have presented it in a beautiful manner. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your meaningful poem. Your artwork choice enhances your message of the ocean waves. Your poem flows well and rhymes wonderfully. You write with such ease, grace and wisdom! Lovely poem! Best wishes!
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I enjoyed reading your meaningful poem. Your artwork choice enhances your message of the ocean waves. Your poem flows well and rhymes wonderfully. You write with such ease, grace and wisdom! Lovely poem! Best wishes!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Raul1
I think oceans deliver many waves in shapes of water and they are real strong. I like the creative sentences you have penned. Excellent work! No mistakes. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
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I think oceans deliver many waves in shapes of water and they are real strong. I like the creative sentences you have penned. Excellent work! No mistakes. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Thesis
You've captured the essence of the writing prompt. I like how you show the life of a wave and how the power of the ocean creates them and eventually witnesses their demise.
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You've captured the essence of the writing prompt. I like how you show the life of a wave and how the power of the ocean creates them and eventually witnesses their demise.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
I like this one it's really good! An interesting way of looking at the ocean and the sea as it laps the shoreline! Lovely picture and enjoy the script you chose. I wish you best a luck and a great day!
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I like this one it's really good! An interesting way of looking at the ocean and the sea as it laps the shoreline! Lovely picture and enjoy the script you chose. I wish you best a luck and a great day!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from godlucifer
i think waves can be romantic. especially if you sit by the sea with your partner. your poem was definitely creative. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
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i think waves can be romantic. especially if you sit by the sea with your partner. your poem was definitely creative. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Teri7
Willie, This is a very well written rhyming poem about the roaring sea you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Willie, This is a very well written rhyming poem about the roaring sea you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from JanPerry
Thanks for your waves thundering onto shore.
"No wave anymore" first paragraph, doesn't make any sense. Poor grammar. Then there's no wave?
Yes there is probably a scientific explanation of why waves finish at the shore. Maybe it's the shape of the land? Another thought to ponder.
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Thanks for your waves thundering onto shore.
"No wave anymore" first paragraph, doesn't make any sense. Poor grammar. Then there's no wave?
Yes there is probably a scientific explanation of why waves finish at the shore. Maybe it's the shape of the land? Another thought to ponder.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Sarita Méndez
One can feel the rhythm of the waves while reading your poem.
It's a very beautiful text, and you chose the right color to fit the theme of the poem :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
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One can feel the rhythm of the waves while reading your poem.
It's a very beautiful text, and you chose the right color to fit the theme of the poem :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023