One Man's Calling
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and authentic dialogue. I particularly related to Ben describing that all Churches do have more goals in common related to God. I often think that myself and always have. Best wishes!
Alexandra
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent story chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and authentic dialogue. I particularly related to Ben describing that all Churches do have more goals in common related to God. I often think that myself and always have. Best wishes!
Alexandra
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your fabulous review!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Ben knows that, as part of his mission to God, he has to be proactive in helping the local people, even the pastor, to overcome their alcohol addiction. Thus by the end we see his influence acquiring a charitable donation to set up a branch of AA. I don't know if, in the last sentence, the reference to Ben thanking God for every "step" alludes to the 12 step method of AA. Thanks for sharing, Wayne! Debbie
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Ben knows that, as part of his mission to God, he has to be proactive in helping the local people, even the pastor, to overcome their alcohol addiction. Thus by the end we see his influence acquiring a charitable donation to set up a branch of AA. I don't know if, in the last sentence, the reference to Ben thanking God for every "step" alludes to the 12 step method of AA. Thanks for sharing, Wayne! Debbie
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Hah! I didn't think of the 'steps' then, but it works.
Thank you.