Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great use of the reference to Venus for the symbolism of a true and deep love. I like your information about the "higher love and wisdom." But I don't consider it a science.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Yes many people are divided on the myth or science.

Thank you very much. Big sister. I hope you have a wonderful week ahead. (*÷*)

Love

Marival

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I seem to remember a film called "mercury" rising, as if it was the planet, Mercury, but I don't think it was, more like temperature, what a wonder suite of tankas this was Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for the kind and helpful review.

Gypsy

reply by royowen on 27-Aug-2023

Well done

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

I'm waiting for you to deep in <-- go deep in? to dip in?

other than that, great imagery in this tanka love suite
love the dark colours at the top and bottom and bright in the middle

thank you for sharing
shelley :)




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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023

Oops I fixed it. Thank you!

Thank you very much for the kind and helpful review.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was a very fluid poem. It was like water that moved as one though there were many individual drops. I loved the descriptive passes like the sequined stars. Beautifully written. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for the kind and helpful review.

Gypsy