One Man's Calling
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Comment from lyenochka
Well, this lawyer seems to know a lot about Ben - a scary lot. And that Clay character, though not to be trusted, seems to really like Ben after all. I hope there will be a new team around Ben.
Seem's your Mason Salinger (Seems) I don't think you need an apostrophe
as it's a simple third person singular)
He dón need no ancient history (don') I think you want the apostrophe to show the missing "n't"
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Well, this lawyer seems to know a lot about Ben - a scary lot. And that Clay character, though not to be trusted, seems to really like Ben after all. I hope there will be a new team around Ben.
Seem's your Mason Salinger (Seems) I don't think you need an apostrophe
as it's a simple third person singular)
He dón need no ancient history (don') I think you want the apostrophe to show the missing "n't"
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you. And of course you are right about the grammar and punctuation. Thank you.