Saving Mr. Calvin
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Comment from royowen
Actually, bats and balls of many sports have designed and advanced over the years, the balls to be helpfully and aerodynamically designe, pus players are skilled in their use, as are bats, from the expensively produced from the best woods or materials available, I love the developments of relationships, beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Actually, bats and balls of many sports have designed and advanced over the years, the balls to be helpfully and aerodynamically designe, pus players are skilled in their use, as are bats, from the expensively produced from the best woods or materials available, I love the developments of relationships, beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Roy. Equipment then was still pretty primitive. It isn't until a few hundred years later that they begin making metal heads and hickory shafts and binding them together as irons.
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That?s progress, cricket bats are still made out of the same wood they made them out of for hundreds of years, but the balls ate still bound leather, the bats but they are heavier and have a greater centre spot. They can hit the ball out of the stadium frequently now, the shorter game?s more exciting than baseball now.
Comment from JSD
Oooh, does the portal beckon? Exciting stuff. Can't wait. Well done and I look forward to the end of Part One. Hopefully I'll have a six left for the cumulative pleasure you have given me.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Oooh, does the portal beckon? Exciting stuff. Can't wait. Well done and I look forward to the end of Part One. Hopefully I'll have a six left for the cumulative pleasure you have given me.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much, John. Yes, we're about to go "Back to the Future," and I hope you find some surprises in store when we do.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written. Error-free.
Sounds like a good place for a kid to disappear, leading to some sort of chaos. Especially since things are a bit too 'Hallmarky' at the moment.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Nicely written. Error-free.
Sounds like a good place for a kid to disappear, leading to some sort of chaos. Especially since things are a bit too 'Hallmarky' at the moment.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Yes, I wanted to build the sadness of his leaving them. Will he ever see them again? Who knows?
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Yes, I can feel the final rays of the descending sun easing from the landscape, and yet the morn tomorrow will rise again and instead of the usual cast I am suspecting the children will take over.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Yes, I can feel the final rays of the descending sun easing from the landscape, and yet the morn tomorrow will rise again and instead of the usual cast I am suspecting the children will take over.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Very poetic! We shall see.