Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This is a perfect poem for what is going on in the US and around the world! Thank you for sharing it with us. I am praying for so many areas right now. We need rain so badly and other places are getting too much rain.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Barbara,
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate." - Linda Grayson

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hope you are all staying safe, MariVal! I know your area also had an earthquake. How are you doing?
Great way to share a news story and I like how you made the font changes to show us the waves!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

We are okay. It's good but the cell phone warnings of floods and earthquakes are scary. Thank you, big sister.

love
marival

reply by lyenochka on 21-Aug-2023

I know! I remember there were always after shocks when I lived in CA.
Praying for safety for you. 💖🙏

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you for the prayers, we need them. I'm taking Atticus to the library while we can. :)

reply by lyenochka on 21-Aug-2023

💖🙏🌼

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Oh you live in Southern California, That is here I am from!
My sisters live in Fullerton and Oceanside and say all is well there..
I think you Haiku poem is pure genius!!
Did you enter that fun contest where you post a very old poem of yours?
I did... such fun and we will see what happens.
Lisa

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 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

I have not entered that contest. I only enter cash contests.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate." - Linda Grayson

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This always reminds me of building the house on the rock, but then there are some marvellous seaside houses washed away, this is beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate." - Linda Grayson

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

Gypsy, This is a great haiku about this really rough storm. I did not know you and your family lived in Southern California. Our youngest son lives in San Diego. I have been praying for all in the path of this storm. I am thankful you and your family are o.k. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and for the exceptional six stars review.

Gypsy
"There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate." - Linda Grayson