River run
Part of God's beauty.40 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice poem! Great rhyming too! To go with it I think it's a fine package you put together here. I see no issues with grammar esthetics, subject matter or sentence structure. good job! this is a fine submission. Good luck to you!
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Very nice poem! Great rhyming too! To go with it I think it's a fine package you put together here. I see no issues with grammar esthetics, subject matter or sentence structure. good job! this is a fine submission. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Janet Foor
I wish that dream was real as well. I have seen the freshwater merge with the salt water and the abundance of wildflowers and beautiful rock formations. A sight to behold.
I enjoyed your beautiful poem Willie.
Blessings and happy dreams
Janet
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I wish that dream was real as well. I have seen the freshwater merge with the salt water and the abundance of wildflowers and beautiful rock formations. A sight to behold.
I enjoyed your beautiful poem Willie.
Blessings and happy dreams
Janet
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We sure would love for some dreams to come true. You did a wonderful job painting this beautiful scene with words. Thank you for sharing this wonderful rhyming poem with us.
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We sure would love for some dreams to come true. You did a wonderful job painting this beautiful scene with words. Thank you for sharing this wonderful rhyming poem with us.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from rspoet
Hello Willie,
You've written an excellent uplifting poem about the beauty
of nature with very good exact rhymes.
An idyllic scene of rivers, grass and flowers,
and the great salt sea. A dream, or perhaps a memory.
Perfect picture to match your words.
Yes, I think we all wish some dreams would come true.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Willie,
You've written an excellent uplifting poem about the beauty
of nature with very good exact rhymes.
An idyllic scene of rivers, grass and flowers,
and the great salt sea. A dream, or perhaps a memory.
Perfect picture to match your words.
Yes, I think we all wish some dreams would come true.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from harmony13
The author's poem is calming, comforting and beautiful. The words of this
poem flow and connect well. The artwork paints a visual picture of the
scene described in these words. Thank you for the author notes - yes,
I agree! Have a wonderful day! Maria
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The author's poem is calming, comforting and beautiful. The words of this
poem flow and connect well. The artwork paints a visual picture of the
scene described in these words. Thank you for the author notes - yes,
I agree! Have a wonderful day! Maria
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Sally Law
I have these kind of dreams too. I think since they are in color, they must be from the Lord. They are a sustaining grace for me these days, believe me. Sending you my best today as always and a virtual six for this beauty.
Sal XOs
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I have these kind of dreams too. I think since they are in color, they must be from the Lord. They are a sustaining grace for me these days, believe me. Sending you my best today as always and a virtual six for this beauty.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from zanya
It would be wonderful if dreams came true - a lovely outline of images here from the natural world reminding us of how beautiful it can really be - love the simplicity but power of the language.
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It would be wonderful if dreams came true - a lovely outline of images here from the natural world reminding us of how beautiful it can really be - love the simplicity but power of the language.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Terry Broxson
You have written a beautiful poem. I think it should be in a contest for rhymes. Its beauty is found in the simplicity of flow, rhymes, message, and economy of words. Excellent. Terry.
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You have written a beautiful poem. I think it should be in a contest for rhymes. Its beauty is found in the simplicity of flow, rhymes, message, and economy of words. Excellent. Terry.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Kate MacDonald
A wonderful glimpse into a watery world that both refreshes and calms one. Whilst reading your poem I was with you there by the side of the river enjoying the sights and sounds.
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A wonderful glimpse into a watery world that both refreshes and calms one. Whilst reading your poem I was with you there by the side of the river enjoying the sights and sounds.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and nice presentation, Willie.
-I think dreams coming true is a good idea,
as long as they are good ones.
-You do a good job describing this one.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You describe a beautiful place,
and maybe somewhere it is actually real.
I'd like to think it is more than one, too.
-A very good opening verse. I don't know
why but I like the last line about
waters running slow.
-I also like the fresh waters meeting
"Salt waters of the sea."
-A very good concluding verse.
-Have a great day and rest of your week.
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-Lovely image and nice presentation, Willie.
-I think dreams coming true is a good idea,
as long as they are good ones.
-You do a good job describing this one.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You describe a beautiful place,
and maybe somewhere it is actually real.
I'd like to think it is more than one, too.
-A very good opening verse. I don't know
why but I like the last line about
waters running slow.
-I also like the fresh waters meeting
"Salt waters of the sea."
-A very good concluding verse.
-Have a great day and rest of your week.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
