Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this deeply reflective and sensitive post Gypsy, one of those sadly geared to the poignantly measured and sadly nostalgic, but an excellent post my friend, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023

Ray

Thank you very much for the excellent review.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 15-Aug-2023

Most welcome

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Exceptional

This is very well written and romantic. I like the expression of Ocean in the seashell. I like that you are putting together many books. Good luck.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023

Thank you very much . Lisa. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Gogyohka poem. -nice picture presentation of the ocean- good flow - poem paints a soft picture with it's words Nice - nice satori ! Externalizing - thoughts of past regret - to live forever
With the sounds of the ocean in the sea shell - my take anyway - Zen perspective- nice job AP

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023

Thank you very much, I appreciate your time and kindness. Have a wonderful night.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like the "ocean in the seashell" which while it is sad that the couple is no longer together, there is a lovely sense of the memories of the ocean which is still in the mind of the narrator.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. Yes, thinking about Robert today but it doesn't hurt anymore. I appreciate your time and kindness. Have a wonderful night.

Love,
marival

reply by lyenochka on 14-Aug-2023

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was such a play on the reality of the lost love. The sound of the ocean in the seashell echoing the loss. The only reminder of what was special times before. Lovely and melancholy. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023

Thank you, Gretchen. You understand my poem well. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

strolling at the beach <-- shouldn't it be ON the beach?

great zen gogyohka
memories of lost loves are always good for poems lol

thank you for sharing
shelley :)



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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023

thank you, shelley, i wasn't sure if it was on or at. I appreciate your time. Have a lovely night.

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