Guided by Faith
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Those two words "I won't," show her strength. I say it myself to Chris, when he asks. If he can help me go up the steps. I have MS, with good Ang bad days. So, I found it to be authentic for a proud women like Emma, to say that. I also like the back and forth as he tries to be near to help her. Your experience as a mom and grandma shows through the words Between Emma and her mother. More exceptional words from you, bringing your story alive for us readers. Have a good week ahead, my Friend! :)) Alexandra
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Those two words "I won't," show her strength. I say it myself to Chris, when he asks. If he can help me go up the steps. I have MS, with good Ang bad days. So, I found it to be authentic for a proud women like Emma, to say that. I also like the back and forth as he tries to be near to help her. Your experience as a mom and grandma shows through the words Between Emma and her mother. More exceptional words from you, bringing your story alive for us readers. Have a good week ahead, my Friend! :)) Alexandra
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Mmm, it's start to look like a love story, and have I said that this Seth guy is what I want in a man:)Thank you for sharing and I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Mmm, it's start to look like a love story, and have I said that this Seth guy is what I want in a man:)Thank you for sharing and I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The story continues along nicely. Your characters are genuine, authentic. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. The story continues along nicely. Your characters are genuine, authentic. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
It's a good thing you remind us how long Emma and Seth have known each other. It feels like much longer since they get along so well together.
Although Emma complains that Seth is bossy, she seems to appreciate it at the moment.
Seth is well aware that his resolve is slipping. The age difference is slowly deteriorating.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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It's a good thing you remind us how long Emma and Seth have known each other. It feels like much longer since they get along so well together.
Although Emma complains that Seth is bossy, she seems to appreciate it at the moment.
Seth is well aware that his resolve is slipping. The age difference is slowly deteriorating.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
So glad to be at a new chapter or part chapter or whatever. It will be interesting about Peggy and George. Maybe it will let Seth off her chasings. No spags.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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So glad to be at a new chapter or part chapter or whatever. It will be interesting about Peggy and George. Maybe it will let Seth off her chasings. No spags.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Another excellent chapter. I like the way Seth takes care of Emma. He is so nice and it's easy to see he cares about her. I don't think 9 years difference is bad. Loved it.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Another excellent chapter. I like the way Seth takes care of Emma. He is so nice and it's easy to see he cares about her. I don't think 9 years difference is bad. Loved it.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is a well written chapter, and the reader sees more of the total support team that surrounds your main female character and help they all provide. This chapter works well with your established formula. I know this is the way you want the characters, and Emma to be.
How about we {can} take shifts?
-how about:
-How about we take shifts?
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Hmm, this is a well written chapter, and the reader sees more of the total support team that surrounds your main female character and help they all provide. This chapter works well with your established formula. I know this is the way you want the characters, and Emma to be.
How about we {can} take shifts?
-how about:
-How about we take shifts?
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I took out 'can'. Thank you for the help. I appreciate it. I just wanted you to know that since the 11th when Gateway to Deception became available, I've sold 29 copies. Not a lot, but it's doing well. I won't get rich, but okay. I do an author's fair Saturday where I'll 'officially' launch it.
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That's great.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine chapter Barbara as these two are working things out together. Emma is a pretty independent character and Seth is a little controlling as I am sure she knows when to take her medicine. A suspenseful post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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A fine chapter Barbara as these two are working things out together. Emma is a pretty independent character and Seth is a little controlling as I am sure she knows when to take her medicine. A suspenseful post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Yes, Seth is bossy as Emma puts it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, I am so glad I have six stars to give you for this great chapter. All the characters are great except Emma. Did I miss a part of this story about her? Has she always been this stubborn around Seth? I just wish they could fall in love and be happy! Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Barbara, I am so glad I have six stars to give you for this great chapter. All the characters are great except Emma. Did I miss a part of this story about her? Has she always been this stubborn around Seth? I just wish they could fall in love and be happy! Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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They are starting to realize their feelings, just not ready to admit them. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"photo's" doesn't need the apostrophe
Oh, goodie, a man who can cook! I'd snap him up in an instant.
I didn't understand the paragraph with Peggy running out of Elliot's house partially dressed. She's involved with George Elliot while she wants Seth? I must have missed something or I'm mis-remembering (if that's a word!).
Emma is a stubborn one, lol!
Thanks, Barbara - see you next weekend.
Pam
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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"photo's" doesn't need the apostrophe
Oh, goodie, a man who can cook! I'd snap him up in an instant.
I didn't understand the paragraph with Peggy running out of Elliot's house partially dressed. She's involved with George Elliot while she wants Seth? I must have missed something or I'm mis-remembering (if that's a word!).
Emma is a stubborn one, lol!
Thanks, Barbara - see you next weekend.
Pam
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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You didn't miss anything. Yes, Peggy is a player. More will come out later. LOL Thank you for the kind review. I fixed photos.