Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
Your fine story, as ever, reads faultlessly and with pace as the group arduously prepares the ground for the imminent competition. There is great warmth and humour in the dialogue which combines to make this story of a bygone age so comforting and magical to read. Well done, Jim! Debbie
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
Thank you, Debbie. I really appreciate that.