Sail On
Together We...15 total reviews
Comment from JSD
Lovely refrain. Beautiful imagery. A great love poem without those key words. A really touching and engaging piece of writing. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Lovely refrain. Beautiful imagery. A great love poem without those key words. A really touching and engaging piece of writing. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your use of metaphors carries this poetry through, creating wondering imagery and feeling. Love is a journey, so setting sail together into the unknown where seas will at times be rough perfectly describes the commitment that love is. Therein lies its beauty. A wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Your use of metaphors carries this poetry through, creating wondering imagery and feeling. Love is a journey, so setting sail together into the unknown where seas will at times be rough perfectly describes the commitment that love is. Therein lies its beauty. A wonderful poem.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you, I'm always grateful for encouraging reviews. :)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very pretty rhyming love poem and the entire presentation is beautiful, the colors and photo. How wonderful to have had love come right onto shore where you waited, lonely. Excellent writing! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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This is a very pretty rhyming love poem and the entire presentation is beautiful, the colors and photo. How wonderful to have had love come right onto shore where you waited, lonely. Excellent writing! Best wishes!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from JT traveller
This is so romantic and beautiful. I particularly enjoyed the reinforcement of your words in the concluding paragraph. Wonderful effort. I wish I knew more about the background story. Jacqueline
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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This is so romantic and beautiful. I particularly enjoyed the reinforcement of your words in the concluding paragraph. Wonderful effort. I wish I knew more about the background story. Jacqueline
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Peitho
This gave me waves of emotions, sadness, relief, happy...
I enjoyed the imagery, I really want to go to the beach now. Hopefully someone will get beached next to me! Lol
Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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This gave me waves of emotions, sadness, relief, happy...
I enjoyed the imagery, I really want to go to the beach now. Hopefully someone will get beached next to me! Lol
Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
