Some Cents
Or none. (nonsense poem contest)18 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Total nonsense! "Did you write all these words while asleep in your bed, or dig them out with a teaspoon from your little head?" Okay, I didn't do so well, but you DID! Fun poem.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Total nonsense! "Did you write all these words while asleep in your bed, or dig them out with a teaspoon from your little head?" Okay, I didn't do so well, but you DID! Fun poem.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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lol Ginda I think this some grade-A nonsense! Well done! Haha
Thank you so much for this fun review!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That is funny and is appropriately full of nonsense. Well done!
I eat there every day
At the most, once a week
Those are the lines I thought were funniest.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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That is funny and is appropriately full of nonsense. Well done!
I eat there every day
At the most, once a week
Those are the lines I thought were funniest.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah! Mystery Writer!
Your offering for the "Funny Nonsense Poem" is exactly what the doctor ordered this evening.
As I was reading - and smiling - I thought to myself, "What the heck is going on here?" Wasn't until I scrolled down and realized the purpose of your post, and I laughed aloud!
Creative and fun!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Hah! Mystery Writer!
Your offering for the "Funny Nonsense Poem" is exactly what the doctor ordered this evening.
As I was reading - and smiling - I thought to myself, "What the heck is going on here?" Wasn't until I scrolled down and realized the purpose of your post, and I laughed aloud!
Creative and fun!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Diane, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed my nonsense lol
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Very clever mystery poet. I loved your take on the concept of "nonsence" and especially your last stanza.
I really enjoyed this and best wishes in the contest. Quite a few good entries here.
Take care
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Very clever mystery poet. I loved your take on the concept of "nonsence" and especially your last stanza.
I really enjoyed this and best wishes in the contest. Quite a few good entries here.
Take care
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jmdg1954
Yup. Attempt achieved.
Your nonsense poem was that from end to beginning.
I got a chuckle from it, starting with the photo.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Yup. Attempt achieved.
Your nonsense poem was that from end to beginning.
I got a chuckle from it, starting with the photo.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Hehe
Xo
Jessica
Comment from jim vecchio
At first I thought I was reading this wrong, then realized this was a nonsense poem. You did a great job! Very funny! That was a cute picture to go along with it.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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At first I thought I was reading this wrong, then realized this was a nonsense poem. You did a great job! Very funny! That was a cute picture to go along with it.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Jim!
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I had some sense to red Some Cents!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a fun/nonsense verse which perfectly fits the brief. You have such a jaunty tone to your poem which immediately engages the reader, taking them on your little journey to that special eating place of yours where you have your own table. I think the rhymes are a bit forced at times - AM/ham - is certainly stretching it a bit:( But this is an enjoyable read and best of luck in the contest! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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This is a fun/nonsense verse which perfectly fits the brief. You have such a jaunty tone to your poem which immediately engages the reader, taking them on your little journey to that special eating place of yours where you have your own table. I think the rhymes are a bit forced at times - AM/ham - is certainly stretching it a bit:( But this is an enjoyable read and best of luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Debbie, thank you! I ended up revising based on your helpful feedback.
Xo
Comment from JSD
Best of these I've read. Excellent nonsense but the highlight of course is your title and pun at the end of the poem. The rhyme is great but I think the rhythm falters slightly on 'right up to the third floor'. How about 'straight to the third floor'?
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Best of these I've read. Excellent nonsense but the highlight of course is your title and pun at the end of the poem. The rhyme is great but I think the rhythm falters slightly on 'right up to the third floor'. How about 'straight to the third floor'?
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica