Angels Unaware
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Comment from patcelaw
This is a very interesting chapter that you have written. It flows well when it is read aloud by the on my iPad. I am enjoying the stories that you were telling us. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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This is a very interesting chapter that you have written. It flows well when it is read aloud by the on my iPad. I am enjoying the stories that you were telling us. Patricia.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much Patty. I still have some big moments I want to share with how I eventually adopted her little girl. Blessings!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely chapter about your wedding day and how, in the end, nothing mattered but the two of you together. I couldn't help wonder when Mary looked so pale during the ceremony whether she was pregnant? (I always jump to that conclusion, sorry). As ever, an enjoyable read in faultless prose. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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A lovely chapter about your wedding day and how, in the end, nothing mattered but the two of you together. I couldn't help wonder when Mary looked so pale during the ceremony whether she was pregnant? (I always jump to that conclusion, sorry). As ever, an enjoyable read in faultless prose. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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No one could figure out why she had seizures in the first place. Early on in our marriage I sensed she was hyperventhilating. The drugs were also doing more harm than good. Also to your point, we feared that she could have been pregnant just before our marriage and others might count the months down on our intimacy. I'm humbly grateful that you have consistently commented as things progress. I still feel some wonderful moments have yet to be told. Thanks!
