Guided by Faith
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Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad that they finally talked but I guess it's too early for confession of their real feelings for each other. It's good that Seth brought up his concern for Emma's safety. At least, they feel comfortable with one another now. I liked that comment about the relationship between Ace and Molly in the rumor mill. Lol.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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I'm glad that they finally talked but I guess it's too early for confession of their real feelings for each other. It's good that Seth brought up his concern for Emma's safety. At least, they feel comfortable with one another now. I liked that comment about the relationship between Ace and Molly in the rumor mill. Lol.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
This chapter built up slowly through some more around the house moments between Seth and Emma. She still seems to be keeping him at arms length. But she is also leaning on him. The creepy guy who siphoned her gas and seems to be stalking her injects plenty of tension and suspense, and then at the end you have that phone call where Ace seems to be picking up on something that could be dangerous. Nice job building up the tension and suspense to the end of this chapter. estory
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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This chapter built up slowly through some more around the house moments between Seth and Emma. She still seems to be keeping him at arms length. But she is also leaning on him. The creepy guy who siphoned her gas and seems to be stalking her injects plenty of tension and suspense, and then at the end you have that phone call where Ace seems to be picking up on something that could be dangerous. Nice job building up the tension and suspense to the end of this chapter. estory
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
This is another great chapter you have penned my friend. I have read it over a few times and that is why I has taken me so long to get back to you. I have been out of pocket you could say. This is a great chapter full of great descriptive words and letting the reader know things are about to start happening now! Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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This is another great chapter you have penned my friend. I have read it over a few times and that is why I has taken me so long to get back to you. I have been out of pocket you could say. This is a great chapter full of great descriptive words and letting the reader know things are about to start happening now! Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are so welcome! They are true and it's getting exciting!!!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Exceptional! I think you must have fixed any errors because I could see none. Again I like the authenticity of of your dialogues and the story is at a good pace for reading here, which is nice. I was getting worried for her, actually. Very effective writing!! Best wishes! :)) Alexandra
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Exceptional! I think you must have fixed any errors because I could see none. Again I like the authenticity of of your dialogues and the story is at a good pace for reading here, which is nice. I was getting worried for her, actually. Very effective writing!! Best wishes! :)) Alexandra
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think I've missed the first part, but their might be a love affair in the air, or maybe I misunderstood. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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I think I've missed the first part, but their might be a love affair in the air, or maybe I misunderstood. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is well-written, and I didn't catch any problems. Emma is just a little too naïve. She is old enough to feel attraction to Seth, but she seems so determined to keep it on the friend level. She needs to dream about him, even if she isn't fully sure what happens between a man and woman. It would also take her mind off her very real reason to be afraid of the mystery man.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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This is well-written, and I didn't catch any problems. Emma is just a little too naïve. She is old enough to feel attraction to Seth, but she seems so determined to keep it on the friend level. She needs to dream about him, even if she isn't fully sure what happens between a man and woman. It would also take her mind off her very real reason to be afraid of the mystery man.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
This is a solid chapter overall, everything moving along.
Finally someone took it upon themselves to sit this immature, coddled girl down. Good job pastor. Will it work? TBD... she did finally sit down and talk after many times putting it off after everyone left.
I am totally baffled by this line:
She petted him. "He can, but [[people are going to talk about his relationship with Molly."]]
What people? What relationship? They are dogs.
Books moving right along.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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This is a solid chapter overall, everything moving along.
Finally someone took it upon themselves to sit this immature, coddled girl down. Good job pastor. Will it work? TBD... she did finally sit down and talk after many times putting it off after everyone left.
I am totally baffled by this line:
She petted him. "He can, but [[people are going to talk about his relationship with Molly."]]
What people? What relationship? They are dogs.
Books moving right along.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. She was teasing about the dogs, making a joke.
Comment from Wendy G
Good. I am glad they have had a chat and cleared the air between them. Pastor Pat is intuitive and wise. But the presence of the car and the unknown man hint at danger ahead and it is disconcerting for Emma not to know why she is being targeted. Well written. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Good. I am glad they have had a chat and cleared the air between them. Pastor Pat is intuitive and wise. But the presence of the car and the unknown man hint at danger ahead and it is disconcerting for Emma not to know why she is being targeted. Well written. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
For the record, those are the four ingredients I always order on my pizza!
Hooray for Pastor Pat! He seems to be as frustrated as I am regarding Emma. It sounds like she and Seth are back on track. However, you have set us up for something bad to happen in the night. Of course, Emma has Ace sleeping with her and Seth - I'm sure - watching her house, so she'll be okay.
As always, good dialogue and progression.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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For the record, those are the four ingredients I always order on my pizza!
Hooray for Pastor Pat! He seems to be as frustrated as I am regarding Emma. It sounds like she and Seth are back on track. However, you have set us up for something bad to happen in the night. Of course, Emma has Ace sleeping with her and Seth - I'm sure - watching her house, so she'll be okay.
As always, good dialogue and progression.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
A meaty chapter, Barbara.
"I think you care for Seth and are using whatever is going on to ensure you don't get any closer," [BINGO! The preacher hit the nail on the head. Poor Seth!]
What I like as I get more and more into this chapter is how you keep Emma and Seth "in character". Seth could ease things if he didn't tease here, but that wouldn't be Seth.
"You're not sleeping on my couch," interrupted Emma. "And I'm not sleeping in your spare room." [She isn't suggesting -- she couldn't be suggesting what I'm thinking?]
When she smiled and her face light up, he grinned. [... and her face LIT up (but I'm sure someone's pointed that out already.)]
As Seth opened the front door, he said, "If you get scared during the night, I'm only a phone call away." [That answered the previous question.]
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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A meaty chapter, Barbara.
"I think you care for Seth and are using whatever is going on to ensure you don't get any closer," [BINGO! The preacher hit the nail on the head. Poor Seth!]
What I like as I get more and more into this chapter is how you keep Emma and Seth "in character". Seth could ease things if he didn't tease here, but that wouldn't be Seth.
"You're not sleeping on my couch," interrupted Emma. "And I'm not sleeping in your spare room." [She isn't suggesting -- she couldn't be suggesting what I'm thinking?]
When she smiled and her face light up, he grinned. [... and her face LIT up (but I'm sure someone's pointed that out already.)]
As Seth opened the front door, he said, "If you get scared during the night, I'm only a phone call away." [That answered the previous question.]
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.