Saving Mr. Calvin
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another great chapter here with Arie and Killian delighted by her uncle's kind generosity at agreeing to host a demonstration of their new game at the fair. The dialogue is beautifully done here with humour and great affection for Arie. As ever, a very enjoyable read. Many thanks, Jim. Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Another great chapter here with Arie and Killian delighted by her uncle's kind generosity at agreeing to host a demonstration of their new game at the fair. The dialogue is beautifully done here with humour and great affection for Arie. As ever, a very enjoyable read. Many thanks, Jim. Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much, Debbie. Your reviews are so encouraging to me. I really appreciate your kind words.
Comment from JSD
Excellent! Get those greens manicured to a perfect length and then I have one more thing to expect. Bunkers! I look forward to the next exciting instalment.
John
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Excellent! Get those greens manicured to a perfect length and then I have one more thing to expect. Bunkers! I look forward to the next exciting instalment.
John
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Ah, no bunkers in Part 1. I'm reserving those until Part 2. So glad you're enjoying this, John.