2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I could literally hear the windchill. Love the sense of the moment in this. It speaks volumes of the coastal setting. I could just see the patina of the chimes as the salty air has turned the metal from shine to mottled. Great poem. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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I could literally hear the windchill. Love the sense of the moment in this. It speaks volumes of the coastal setting. I could just see the patina of the chimes as the salty air has turned the metal from shine to mottled. Great poem. Gretchen
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much. Gretchen.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A lovely picture and used to have wind chimes in my Spanish home, but they just became worn out in the end. I love the tinkling sound of them and here they remind us of the ocean breeze and the summer, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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A lovely picture and used to have wind chimes in my Spanish home, but they just became worn out in the end. I love the tinkling sound of them and here they remind us of the ocean breeze and the summer, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much
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