Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"There will no need" should this be ( be no need) 4th line in Lor'de speech, I still love reading these characters, their lingo has me smiling/chuckling all the way through, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thanks, kahpot, for the help.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I wonder if Pons had Skar in mind when he committed him to the job of a running mate for the presidency, thanks for this story Bill, good seeing pons and Ned in action, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : I do h(j)ave a clone...

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thanks, Roy, for giving this a look.

reply by royowen on 21-Jul-2023

Welcome

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I love thise Ned and Pons scripts. There are laugh lines all thru them. This one is an especially funny one. Ned seemed convinced Donner was one of Santa's raindeer.
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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you, Beth. Maybe we can get Ned elected this time.