One Man's Calling
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another great chapter Wayne, moving at pace as Ben continues on his mission, now freeing prostitutes from the bordellos. This involves a fair bit of risk and tension in the story but Ben is up to the task and on a roll, his belief in God getting ever stronger. There's one para starting Wish you could Tony... which confused me because the dialogue suddenly seemed to start from nowhere? I've gone back over this but the fluency seems to have become lost somehow? But this was an enjoyable write and I was amused by Diamond Jim's threatening if much more subdued presence (Ben has definitely got something on him). Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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Another great chapter Wayne, moving at pace as Ben continues on his mission, now freeing prostitutes from the bordellos. This involves a fair bit of risk and tension in the story but Ben is up to the task and on a roll, his belief in God getting ever stronger. There's one para starting Wish you could Tony... which confused me because the dialogue suddenly seemed to start from nowhere? I've gone back over this but the fluency seems to have become lost somehow? But this was an enjoyable write and I was amused by Diamond Jim's threatening if much more subdued presence (Ben has definitely got something on him). Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review. I'll go back and try to fix it.
Comment from royowen
This is a great episode in this series of your Wayne. There's actually not many of these stories where the main protagonist is a Christian preacher, and is involved rescuing ladies from what is essentially unwilling prostitution. Beautifully written and handled Wayne, well done, blessings Roy
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This is a great episode in this series of your Wayne. There's actually not many of these stories where the main protagonist is a Christian preacher, and is involved rescuing ladies from what is essentially unwilling prostitution. Beautifully written and handled Wayne, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
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Comment from Wendy G
Well done. A most interesting chapter. Makes me wonder why such miracles of faith and service don't happen these days, or very rarely. Maybe we just don't have the faith of Ben , or just don't ask.
Well written, Wayne. Good read.
Wendy
Typo: "The Methodist minister.... type (of) ministry
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Well done. A most interesting chapter. Makes me wonder why such miracles of faith and service don't happen these days, or very rarely. Maybe we just don't have the faith of Ben , or just don't ask.
Well written, Wayne. Good read.
Wendy
Typo: "The Methodist minister.... type (of) ministry
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the catch and for your very kind review.
(In a later chapter I quote D.L. Moody, who borrowed the sentiment, about the unknowns of a person totally committed to Christ.)