Saving Mr. Calvin
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Comment from JSD
Aww. Sweet. Maybe a bit more of a sense of the closeness of the bodies needed? There is obviously a spark there? Well done for continuing to engage the reader. Most enjoyable.
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Aww. Sweet. Maybe a bit more of a sense of the closeness of the bodies needed? There is obviously a spark there? Well done for continuing to engage the reader. Most enjoyable.
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Yeah, I debated that, but didn't want to overdo that for such young kids. Maybe if they were a few years older. There will be a bit of kissing, though.
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Wahay!