The Deep End
a short story11 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Seems Joe didn't have all the information he needed, and Andy wanted what Joe had. I wonder what the next generation will do? Or will Andy and Janet keep the family secret to themselves?
Excellent story with an unexpected twist at the end. Poor, trusting Joe.
Best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023
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Seems Joe didn't have all the information he needed, and Andy wanted what Joe had. I wonder what the next generation will do? Or will Andy and Janet keep the family secret to themselves?
Excellent story with an unexpected twist at the end. Poor, trusting Joe.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Debi, for the excellent review.